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BYOND Key: Yuander_Xz

Character Names: Kristin Wolff,Timeksyu Hiro.

Species you are applying to play: Tajara,IPC.

What color do you plan making your first alien character: Grey and White.

Have you read our lore section's page on this species: Yes,i away read rules in forums.

 

Why do you wish play with this specific race:

Because i like the aliens biology from space station 13,mainly the Tajara.

 

Identify what make role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:

 

For the IPC,in my vision,they always talk in the correct mod,and for the Tajara,they speech are different and thats make the Tajaras an very off world species.

 

Character Name: Joseph Quinn'Zu
Please provide a short backstory for this character
Joseph Quinn'Zu,and his parents live in a village at least 50 kilometers of the city beseiged to no sides


his village was in both sides,and got burned when it changed to an specific side and needed to emigrate to another village,that his family is current in.

 

What do you like about this character?

I like it because of his life,an average life and without any sides.

How would you rate your role-playing ability? 5/10.

Notes: I had no creativity to do an more interessing backstory to it.

 

 

 

 

 

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Apart from the obvious "everything" wrong with this application, I'm going to touch on Kristin Wolff, your most known character to met.

You job hop a lot. I've seen Kristin as an officer, a roboticist, and a corporate reporter. You'll want to learn to make separate characters for different roles, or to just play a single role as a single character.

I haven't really experienced much of you because you don't really interact with people, so apart from observing your multiple job hopping, I haven't really experienced you.

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Hey, Yuander_Xz.

First of all, a good thing that you want to apply for a whitelist, second, you didn't do very well with it, sadly. But that's okay, everyone starts somewhere.

 

First things first: You always apply for one whitelist per application. So if you want to apply for IPC and Tajara you have to write two different ones.

Second: I think you misunderstood the "Have you read our lore section's page on this species?" part of an application. Not the forum rules are being talked about there. To clarify, the different pages about the races, including their cultures, their home system, differences, etc., on the wiki are being talked about. For Tajara that would be: https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=Tajara , from there you come to the other Tajara pages, as said above, society, planets, culture. I'd encourage you to read it all, even though it's a lot. For IPC it's this page here https://wiki.aurorastation.org/index.php?title=IPC, same as with Tajara, you come to other pages, including important information from there. Again, read it all, it's a bit less than for Tajara.

Third: After reading all this lore you should think about with what character you want to apply. They should be unique, believable and show that you understand both the lore and the species itself. Some people achieve this with relative short backgrounds, others write a lot. It's up to you. Just show us, that you have an understanding of the race you apply for.

 

I hope that helps a bit.

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Yes, and I would recommend making a single thread for each species with their own application.

 

Moving this to the archive for now.

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