Character Feedback: Sei Armas

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Hey, fellow nerds, I'd like some feedback and critique to the cutest guardian angel on the station: Sei Armas.

Memes are welcome, as long as you also give me something constructive. Thanks, you all.
My currently played characters:
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Sei Armas - IAC Paramedic: "Ah, just.....let me help you. You are seriously injured and if untreated you will lose consciousness in about 3 minutes."
Julienne Turner - Bartender: "Welcome to the Ishimura! What can I get you?"
Natalie Pershing - Engine Technician: "Heh? Ah, yes, I'm from Eridani Epsilon. By the way, do you know where we store the classified station blueprints?"
SPRITE - personalAI: "I strongly recommend against this, since it breaks multiple directives. Not that I can stop you, though!
Mirage - Merc/Syndicate: "How the hell did you end up in this crew anyway? Ah, just shut up and look intimidating."
Tpr. Feather - ERT Medic: "This medic armor could have just giant bull's-eyes instead of the red cross painted on it. Works just as good.

Cancer inside:
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Re: Character Feedback: Sei Armas

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Sei is my favorite paramedic and quite possibly my favorite medical character to see. What catches me most is that Sei will RP when responding to a scene. No "wordlessly inject stuff and run them in." She'll do what paramedics are supposed to: stabilize, and talk to the patient about their symptoms/what happened. She's a delight to talk to in the medical lobby, as well. I think your RP with her is top-notch, and she's a really interesting character. She definitely feels like a fully realized person.

So no critiques at this times, just a lot of love. Though if I do think of some constructive criticism, I'll be sure to post it. For now, though, Sei is one of my favorite characters for a reason. You do great with her.
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Current Characters:
Spoiler:
Wynter Steele - Librarian/Corp Reporter - Pink Poetry Pest
Kizikh Guwan - Gardener - The Guwan Garden
Sazya Xichi - Miner - Edict-breaker, Rock-breaker
Sikaevi Suhn'Krashzkrikh - Security Officer - "Jussst call me Sssunny."
Nahjiya Khayaram - Maintenance Technician - "Rrrrepublicanism is bloodshed!"
Hadiyya Nejem - Chemist - Rebel With a Beaker
Rowan "Miss" Fortune - Cargo Tech - Delightful Dreg
Beatrix Saint-Claire - Head of Personnel - Classy Crew Caretaker
Mari Tanaka - Captain - "Together, We Survive"
Mehreen Al-Dimashqi - Chef - Human Grandma in District 6
Samirah Al-Kandari - Janitor - Big Janitor, Big Sister
Ka'Akaix'Myrz C'thur - Phoron Researcher - Vivacious, Voracious Vaurca
Ka'Akaix'Daze Zo'ra - Bartender - "Hey doll, what'zz your poizzzon?"
Amadi Udoka - Medical Resident - IAC Helper
Moth-3R - AI - A literal mother-unit.
Marceline Finch - Mechatronic Engineer - 0% Social Skills, 100% Sleepy
H.A.R.P.I. - pAI - "How exciting!"
Moth - Stationbound - Hovers near the light.
Misfire - Raider/Merc - Would rather shoot the shit than shoot 'em up
Tpr. A'dab "Sphinx" El-Safin - ERT - "Salam, Aurora. Grandma is here for you."
Retired:
Spoiler:
Rafia Lakhani - Maintenance Technician - Frontier Grandma
Zizi'Azik Kuhwinla - Janitor - "Messes for Zizi?? Okay okay!"
Azulzi Sinensiz - Merchant - Treacherous Trader
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