mathiasx702

Sry, but i dont realy under stand the paragraph thing. Could you please explain it to me? And how am i suppose to prove that i have been playing on the server?

BYOND key:Mathiasx702 Character names:Scott Pennington How long have you been playing on Aurora?:4 days Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?: I feel i got what it takes to roleplay a head role Why did you come to Aurora?:a friend recommended it to me Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?:yes, many times Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: To act and speak as if you are the character you're portraying. To speak in context Be resonable against other roleplayers What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?: Keep the department functional and efficient. Deal with issues and problems and solve them in an appropriate manner. Communicate with other heads of staff to increase synergy. always listen to everyone What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: Always communicate with your department and other departments Always listen to staff be nice and reasonable earn respect from your staff Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name:Scott Pennington Character age:30 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): He grew up on mars, did well in elementary school and high school. He later educated himself in the military fleet. in his service he served as military police and learned discipline and order. His ambitions grew and he soon realized that he wanted to lead. he quit the military and educated himself in law and order. he served as warden on one of the biggest orbital prisons in the galaxy. while on the prison station he put down great riots and was commended for his efforts. the station got decommissioned and he began looking for other work, 3 months later a contract was offered to him by Nanotrasen, He was thrilled and accepted the contract soon after. He currently awaits assignment and is ready to serve. What do you like about this character?: He is Decisive and wants to serve He is Carefull when getting friends Nothing can break him What do you dislike about this character?: He is 100% loyal to Nanotrasen, Will do Anything to serve. He lacks Empathy He only likes Heads of staff What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: He is an experienced and robust character, He always wants to serve, and he is an expert when it comes to command structures and protocols. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?: Not perfect, but improving. i am still learning new thing, but I always try my best. Extra notes: I am sorry for the first application, i am not so good with bbcode and i did not see the obvious mistakes, i hope this application fits the require ments and does not waste your time. i realy want to play on this amaizing server.

I will do as you and TishinaStalker suggests. i will Redo my application.

well, i don't want to argue, but i am not trying to make a masterpiece here, just a realistic and believable backstory. I am not good at writhing things like this, i just want to have fun and play this amazing game on this very good and fun server, nothing else. There is a serious lack of HoS's on this server, i only want to help.

Thanks for all the replies and advises, i understand that i need to play on the server a bit more. but if you could, it would be appreciated if you explain to my what is wrong with the backstory.

BYOND key: mathiasx702 Character names:Scott Pennington How long have you been playing on Aurora?:about 10 min Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?: I want to contribute to the community by role-playing heads of staff Why did you come to Aurora?: My friends recommended it to me. Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?: yes,thoroughly Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: paragraph To act and speak as if you are the character you're portraying. paragraph To Speak in context paragraph Be reasonable against other role-players What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?: paragraph Keep the department functional and efficient. paragraph Deal with issues and problems and solve them in an appropriate manner. paragraph Communicate with other heads of staff to increase synergy. paragraph always listen to everyone What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: paragraph Always communicate with your department and other departments paragraph Always listen to staff paragraph be nice and reasonable paragraph earn respect from your staff Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name:Scott Pennington Character age:30 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): He grew up on mars, did well in elementary school and high school. He later educated himself in the military fleet. in his service he served as military police and learned discipline and order. His ambitions grew and he soon realized that he wanted to lead. he quit the military and educated himself in law and order. he served as warden on one of the biggest orbital prisons in the galaxy. while on the prison station he put down great riots and was commended for his efforts. the station got decommissioned and he began looking for other work, 3 months later a contract was offered to him by Nanotrasen, He was thrilled and accepted the contract soon after. He currently awaits assignment and is ready to serve. What do you like about this character?: paragraph He is decisive and wants to serve. paragraph He is careful when getting friends. paragraph Nothing can brake him What do you dislike about this character?: paragraph He is 100% loyal to Nanotrasen, will do anything to serve. paragraph He lacks empathy paragraph Does not care about low paid jobs like janitor, What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: He is an experienced and robust character, He always wants to serve, and he is an expert when it comes to command structures and protocols. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?: Not perfect, but improving. i am still learning new thing, and i always try my best. Extra notes: