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Hi! I play the Idris Ex-Cop Investigator Michael Grayson. I'm always looking to improve my roleplay ability and make my character as believable and enjoyable to others as I possibly can, so please feel free to tell me below what you like about him, what you don't like, what I do well, what needs improving, etc!

I'll provide some context to his character to give people a better understanding of who he is if they've interacted with him but not learned a lot yet so they can make comment on my portrayal of my intentions for the character. A variety of details are omitted because I'd prefer them to be explored in-character via roleplay than simply typed up to be read.

Grayson is a 38 year old veteran cop from Los Angeles on Earth. He's spent twenty years on the job, twelve as a uniformed patrol cop and eight as a homicide detective, investigating deaths of all sorts. He's a divorced father of two kids, and works on the SCCV Horizon mostly out of monetary necessity rather than a desired career change. He loves the work he did, despite the trouble it caused, and laments the lack of true crime fighting he does in his new corporate position.

So, please do let me know what you think and help me improve where you think I need to!

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I feel I have less feedback than people who've interacted with you more would. When I hang around I tend to be on a role that requires me to be available to do stuff and it sometimes hurts my ability to have some CHILL RP TIME.
Grayson is a treat in general, while I haven't had the time to sit down and bar RP with him yet or anything like that. I've gotten to have some fun exchanges with him as VARIANCE and my First Responder. I can't give any real negative feedback but you do a good job of engaging other people and making interesting conversations!

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