Fenix Steele Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 (edited) BYOND key:Fenix steele Character names:Fenix Steele &Fenix Johnson & Michael Steele How long have you been playing on Aurora?: 1 week Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?:do i meay better my playing experiance with new better roles and jobs and challanges Why did you come to Aurora?:best sever i have found so far Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?:yes i have Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: role play is playing out someone elses life you are picking up there life the min you join the game you are not your character you have taken control of there life you are roleplaying. What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?: to make sure all roles are played properly and accurately. What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: to make sure newer players learn how to play correctly so they to may become whitelisted while keeping an active roleplay in affect Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name:Fenix Steele Character age:28 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): Fenix Steele is a younger man but is vary skilled for his age only 28 and already trained in so many fields like cooking hand to hand combat deadly weapon training and has already served 2 years an active captain. What do you like about this character?: he is a pro at everything he dose takeingevery role vary serious. What do you dislike about this character?: hes a dick What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: he gets the job done. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?:i would say im not perfect i give myself an 8 Extra notes: Edited September 5, 2015 by Guest Link to comment
SilverTalismen Posted September 5, 2015 Share Posted September 5, 2015 Just to point out, you can't fool the moderators by marking your app as processing, and two I have worked with you and I DO NOT support this application, it is far too short and this character is abit unbalanced -1 Link to comment
Loow Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 Character age:28 Too young. He would not be a Head of any kind, let alone a captain. What do you dislike about this character?:hes a dick What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: he gets the job done. Too simple. Further explanation could help. Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs):Fenix Steele is a younger man but is vary skilled for his age only 28 and already trained in so many fields like cooking hand to hand combat deadly weapon training and has already served 2 years an active captain. His biography is far too short. In fact, it is one sentence... and it could use a bit of work. cooking hand to hand combat deadly weapon training I picture a man with a frying pan tossing a small stack of combat knives into the dish for "added flavor"... while kicking things off of nearby shelves and yelling like Bruce Lee. This application and this character need a lot of fixing. I don't see this getting approved. -1. And if you really did mark your application as "Processing"... that is just shameful. Link to comment
Loow Posted September 9, 2015 Share Posted September 9, 2015 Character age:28 Too young. He would not be a Head of any kind, let alone a captain. What do you dislike about this character?:hes a dick What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: he gets the job done. Too simple. Further explanation could help. Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs):Fenix Steele is a younger man but is vary skilled for his age only 28 and already trained in so many fields like cooking hand to hand combat deadly weapon training and has already served 2 years an active captain. His biography is far too short. In fact, it is one sentence... and it could use a bit of work. cooking hand to hand combat deadly weapon training I picture a man with a frying pan tossing a small stack of combat knives into the dish for "added flavor"... while kicking things off of nearby shelves and yelling like Bruce Lee. This application and this character need a lot of fixing. I don't see this getting approved. -1. And if you really did mark your application as "Processing"... that is just shameful. Link to comment
Gollee Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 As a note, quite a few people have marked their apps as Processing by accident, don't immediately assume it was a deliberate attempt to confuse, that's just disrespectful. Link to comment
Gollee Posted September 10, 2015 Share Posted September 10, 2015 As a note, quite a few people have marked their apps as Processing by accident, don't immediately assume it was a deliberate attempt to confuse, that's just disrespectful. Link to comment
Aqy Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Application Denied. However, please don't let this discourage you from applying in the future. If you'd like to know the reasons behind this, please PM Aqy and TishinaStalker. It's recommended you contact us, and allow us to offer explanations and hopefully help you in learning from the reasons for this denial before putting in another application. Link to comment
Aqy Posted September 11, 2015 Share Posted September 11, 2015 Application Denied. However, please don't let this discourage you from applying in the future. If you'd like to know the reasons behind this, please PM Aqy and TishinaStalker. It's recommended you contact us, and allow us to offer explanations and hopefully help you in learning from the reasons for this denial before putting in another application. Link to comment
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