[Denied] Nickmun Tajaran Application.

[Nickmun]

BYOND Key:

Nickmun.

Character Names:

John Wright.

Species you are applying to play:

Tajaran.

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):

White or silver.

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:

Yes.

 

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Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question

Why do you wish to play this specific race:

So i can rp as something new and cool with a background where I will be treated diffrent unlike a normal co worker, And act diffrent and play diffrent and work diffrent talk diffrent be colored in a way that is not normal for a human to be and it would be a pretty cool way to play and rp, And so i can become a person i cant freely be in real life, I really want to play this so i don't have to be a human i don't have to be normal at all times.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:

The background the lore the characters the fact they are hated and come from caves of adohmi and not mars or earth, The fact they were in the war and are now one of the worse treated people in the galaxy, The fact they are forced to do more work due to they're superiors not being one of their kind the fact they hate them and talk to them like animals that should be locked up, The fact they will make them take more time then needed of a regular worker.

 

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Character Name:

Nackar niiza'iik.

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs:

Nackar niiza'iik a follower of the elder in his clan Nuckur niiza'iik,He would walk and brave his cave while his mother would hunt for cold resistant food,He wondered upon his father killing the elder of his clan, Before being noticed by his father he ran out of the cave hesitated to walk out into the bright lands filled with miles and miles of cold icy snow, He stepped into the cold freezing due to the lack of time he spent outside then found his mother telling her the horrible traitor his father was, They left for a new cave so they didn't have to die with the rest of the clan.

His mother found a cave miles off from the other it was owned by another clan, Sadly they could not sneak by and adopt a new home with the other clan, In 30 miles without food Nackar niiza'iik almost died for starvation and fell into the thick snow, Cold causing him to shiver and the lack of food making his body weak he was knocked out but his mother carryed him the rest of the way to an empty cave and Nackar niiza'iik was woken up to a warm fire and warm meal, That was the day he realised his life had more meaning then he thought.

As Nackar niiza'iik Aged his mother was unable to hunt and died shortly after on the rocky surface of the cave Nackar niiza'iik would walk back to his clans cave to remember old times, As he arrived at his cave he came across new born tajarans left behind with they're mother, He helped the family with hunting until he could search for the father of the family, He found the father wounded from the hunt and brought him back to the family so they could help, He then remembered why he was there and looked for his father, His father was the elder of his clan due to the elder dieing he realised his father did it for the respect not for murder and Nackar niiza'iik told his father about his mothers death, He then left the cave on the very same day.

What do you like about this character? His noble acts and the harsh backstory he has.

How would you rate your role-playing ability? 7/10

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Notes:Its been awile since i got back to aurora.

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

This shows complete disregard for the lore of the Tajara. This isn't remotely following the Aurora lore for Tajara nor even the Polaris or Bay lore for them. I am at a loss at what server has Tajara living in caves. I encourage you to take the time to read the wikipedia page for the Tajara race before you choose to apply for it. I cannot see this being accepted under any circumstances.

The fact the entire application is bolded but there aren't any loose /b]'s running around is evidence that you're intentionally making this application obtuse as a joke. I'm going to deny it myself right now. If you want an application to be taken seriously and treated with merit please reapply after reading our wiki page for Tajara.