Hello.
Was hoping to get some sort of feedback on my main character Lincoln Bell. I'm more than aware that my RP isn't there yet. After a very long hiatus from role-playing, I've only now returned to it so every single skill of mine is rusty, so I'm taking my time polishing it to enjoyable standards.
Lincoln Bell is a 34 years old Quartermaster from Xanu Prime. Coalition of Colonies. Once a Deck Officer for the Coalition Navy, he brought over his sense of strictness and love for bureaucracy aboard NSS Aurora. Bell's recent divorce is what makes him sour on occasions to those around him, while he tries his best to take control of his anger, which by far is either smoking whole packet of cigarettes or abusing few bottles of whiskey... It doesn't always go his way.
I'm aiming to have Lincoln to be a strict boss who cares about his colleagues over at Cargo while he's trying to put his life back together after his divorce, his personality might not be the kindest or smartest but he's just trying to live on while coping with his personal life. Any type of feedback would be great, regarding the character or the roleplay and how I can improve.
Thanks!