Character Feedback - Florian Dal Farra.

[Kintsugi]

With the death of Coenraad, many were afraid that I, Aurora's most famous and beloved player, would vanish forever. But worry not, my adoring fans. I have a new character! And a new planet. This one's open to public viewing though, unlike Grootveld. https://docs.google.com/document/d/12a-FQ3QGJSVguwwzwOSUUR7hRRzO9468KDwNz1panE8/edit

 

Anyway, leave your comments and critiques if you have them! Thanks.