[Denied]Noobetski Dionae whitelist application

[Noobetski]

BYOND Key: Noobetski

Character Names: John Neves, Frank Silberstein, Eliot Isemann, Harrod Burns, John Strelitz.

Species you are applying to play: Dionae

What color do you plan on making your first alien character: (Color of your character; Dionaea & IPCs exempt)

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format.

One paragraph minimum per question.

Why do you wish to play this specific race:

Dionae provides lot of RP possibilites, including different mind types, different psychology, behaviour and relations with other characters.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:

Dionae are slower, sustain themselve from light or radiation, in life-or-death emergency can split, risking to lose part of their knowledge grow structures from their biomass and have different behaviour depending on mind type, experience and age.

Character Name: Keeper Of The Garden

Please provide a short backstory for this character (Approximately two paragraphs)

Starting their existence on Moghes, they were cared by small Sk'akh worshipping family with respect and dignity. Keeper Of The Garden would tend to agricultural part of their camp, while followers would supply the Diona with land, blood samples and other generous gifts.

But this symbiotic relationship was ruined as the family was attacked by raiders.

Sadly, raiders won the battle and destroyed the harmony. The last Unathi, having connections in Nanotrasen, managed to escape alive from Moghes. Keeper left with them. However most of the Unathi were arrested when they entered Nanotrasen space because this "connection" betrayed them. That was last time Keeper Of The Garden saw this unathi. Luckily enough, Nanotrasen had open gardener vacancy on station called "NSS Aurora". After psychological evaluation, Keeper Of The Garden were classified as Tyrannical Tune mind type. And now they live on station, tending to plants as they were on Moghes, gaining new experience and spreading dionae even further.

What do you like about this character? 

They managed to adapt to new circumstance, survive attack on Moghes and even find a new place to live and gain new knowledge.

How would you rate your role-playing ability?

Not the great roleplayer, but not the worst

Notes: Welp, i tried, hope i won't f*ck up this time.

Edited December 3, 2021 by Noobetski

[Yonnimer]

Hello! Sorry for the delay with this, the team has some questions:

I want to preface this with saying that the backstory does come off as fairly weak, with a lot of things just being skimped over or poorly explained. I'd rather you redo the backstory with the following questions incorporated in it rather than just answering them. 

What exactly was their position in the village on Moghes? Did they just help clear radiation? Directly help with farming? Were they grown as a full gestalt or just eventually formed from multiple nymphs in the village?

Which kingdom does the village belong to? The Hegemony other some independent kingdom?

Does Sk'akh hold any significance to the Dionae personally? Are they apart of it or have they adopted a different religion? 

How do they feel about Moghes/The Hegemony?  How do they feel about unathi culture? 

This is a few questions ultimately combining into one: How did they get off of Moghes exactly, who was this contact that was mentioned, why NT and not Hephaestus? Why were they arrested? Why wasn't the Dionae arrested?

Has anything happened to them since they got employed by NT? 

How do they feel about other species? How do they feel about their own species after meeting a lot more of them in human space?

Have they drank any blood since leaving Moghes?

[Noobetski]

Decline it, i give up, i guess it's my destiny to not get any WLs

[Yonnimer]

Denied on request then