Jaker's most brutally honest character feedback thread...

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I'll eventually put all the feedback onto the OP, I swear!

Houssam Jawdat

He's the guy that has a tackier version of Messa's Bounty. Winters Booby or something cheap.

I like to think of him as a potential rival for Miko with short term alliances, seeing as they're both scheming little scumbags. But aside from that, I want to see some more layers to Houssam as all I really see is him skulking in the shadows or suddenly becoming president of the station. Perhaps it's more of a case of me needing to converse with the character more, but I barely understand his motivations at times and it would be interesting to see more facets to his personality.

 

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