[Accepted] TheGuyThatIsAFK Tajaran Whitelist Application form V2

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BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd

Character Names:

Robert Phillips (Detective/Security Officer) and Emmanuel Woodward(Medical Doctor/Paramedic/Xenobiologist)

Species you are applying to play:

Tajara

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):

Silver (RGB 192, 192, 192)

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:

Yes.

 

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Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question

Why do you wish to play this specific race:

I want to try new races, every race has a different kind of roleplaying, and i have chosen the Tajara because he had a very difficult past and i want to roleplay with it, would be an very fun game, because act as a human is easy, now act as a Tajara is different you need to think as one.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:

I would say that the tajara has some challenges that other races don't, because he has a very rich story, and as i said, you need to think as a Tajara, react like a Tajara (because you WILL be one).

 

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Character Name:

K' Yad N' Kydra

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

K' Yad N' Kydra Is a Tajaran born in Dolor, on a planet called Adhomai. His father, H' Usha P' Khis, died before he was born. He had a difficult childhood without father, so he become aggressive. When he was 12, a group of the New Kingdom kidnapped both (his mother called Izza K'huda and K' yad) and killed his mother burning her in fornt of K' yad. He had an eternal trauma, so he moved to his Uncle house, J' igh P' Khis. with this, he wanted for revenge. Started working on a little workshop and heard rumors of some "NSS Exodus". He didn't care much, but heard too that his father, H' Usha, was killed by the same group that killed his mother. He knew one thing: they were going to kill him too.

When he was 18, he joined the Army to fight the New Kingdom of Adhomai. When he was on Tunguska, going to atack Miran' Mir, he made a friend called Yasha I'husa. When he was assigned to be part of the Artillery with Yasha, he was very happy. When they were firing suppressive fire on the remaining forces of Miran, a sniper started to shoot on K' Yad. But he wasn't shooting to kill, he was shooting to keep him off the mortar. His allies started to fire against the sniper. Thirty minutes later, Yasha neutralized the sniper. When they were going to win, K' yad was shot in the arm by some troopers that were sent by the New Kingdom to neutralize the artillery. When K' Yad was retreating, he saw Yasha being shot in the head and falling on the snow.

When he was 34, heard about the group that killed his family was in Barj' ar. With luck, he joined the Battalion that was going to attack that city. The colonew knew about K' Yad and have put him on the artillhery again. The People's Republic killed the whole army that was on the city, unfortunately, the reiforcements were heavily armed and they came with artillery too. The Republic tried to neutralize them, but their armors were too heavy. The artillery of the New kingdom shot against K' Yad's battalion and neutralized the majority of them. K' Yad survived, but with a large cut on his head and with the arm broken. He was attended by the medics of the Base camp and was released.

With no family, no job, no home, he decided to join that "NSS Exodus". Today he's very happy with his job as Security Officer and will not let anything bad happen with the station.

What do you like about this character? I like the courage of K' Yad and his ways of solving things and i like his maturity too. I like so much that he can not be moved so easily.

How would you rate your role-playing ability?

I would rate 8 to 10.

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Notes:

Im sorry by any gramatical errors or lore errors that i haven't seen.

[CakeIsOssim]

It shows you have enough knowledge about the rebellion on Adhomai, and care enough about it to actually add it as part of your character's backstory. It's a liiiittle cinematic, but I think it's fine. I wouldn't mind seeing you accepted as a Tajara.

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

Hello! Sorry for the delay.

You show an understanding of the civil war engulfing Adhomai. As Ossim said traumatic backstories have little warning signs but the character here isn't portrayed as someone who will use his violent past to have explosive episodes or hurl themselves into valid-hunting antags.