Arkter Posted January 11, 2018 Share Posted January 11, 2018 (edited) BYOND Key: Arkter Character Names: Arkter Kerios, Argus Lindow, Harper Iliron, Gael Ordin Species you are applying to play: IPC What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes Please provide well-articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: This race to me is a unique one. Only bound to its logic and Posibrain, it makes for good rp interaction as they do not fear nor feel pain. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: They are just....A husk of a shell powered by a posibrain with added variables in it, They are often seen as 'Servants' or 'Slaves' to whichever owner/corporation they belong to. They do not act or feel like humans but can UNDERSTAND their emotions. They only thing they feel is their cold hard Posibrain endlessly making new actions or decisions. Character Name: HERO Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs A rather peculiar piece of technology, The HERO series in mind was designed by Hephaestus Industries to be a detective, Being equipped with a shell frame, however, Was not an easy task. They wanted to make an IPC that was able to do the normal duties of a Detective but equipped with a personality chip that allowed them to interrogate a person in a friendly manner, With the end goal being that the interrogated in question easily gives out details that Security seeks because of the approachability and friendliness of the IPC. HERO line IPC Shells also have standard security methods and procedures installed in their Posibrain. The HERO Series IPC shells display a heightened sense of justice and doing the right thing, And as such are programmed to not be easily bribed or be forced into doing a morally 'wrong' decision if deemed as so by the Posibrain. Most HERO line IPC Shells have golden hair and dressed in a formal clothing. Well, it was a matter of time before NT got their hands on one anyways. And so, A unit is shipped to the NSS Aurora. Ready to interrogate their first suspect. What do you like about this character? I like this character in the way that they handle their interrogations. And having a heightened sense of justice of doing the 'right' thing. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would say that I am good but I still have a long way to go. Notes: Edited February 5, 2018 by Guest Link to comment
CakeIsOssim Posted January 19, 2018 Share Posted January 19, 2018 Your backstory, while imaginative, is simply lacking in a few key elements I'm afraid. (also, that must be a very wealthy hobbyist, shells are expensive) I must ask that you give the backstory another attempt, perhaps flesh it out a bit, and make it less comical. Being a synthetic is not exactly all about sunshine and daisies. Link to comment
CakeIsOssim Posted February 5, 2018 Share Posted February 5, 2018 Hello, [mention]Arkter[/mention] I understand your application was quite delayed. However, I cannot delay it any longer now that I am waiting for another response. Please try to address my previous criticisms in the next few days. Link to comment
Arkter Posted February 5, 2018 Author Share Posted February 5, 2018 Hello, @Arkter I understand your application was quite delayed. However, I cannot delay it any longer now that I am waiting for another response. Please try to address my previous criticisms in the next few days. I have edited the backstory. I have tried to the best of my ability to retry and take a new approach to the backstory. Link to comment
CakeIsOssim Posted February 10, 2018 Share Posted February 10, 2018 Application accepted. Link to comment
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