[Denied] Flpfs Bug Permit

[Flpfs]

BYOND Key: Flpfs
Character Names:
Swan
Mending Deep Wounds
ISU-Buffalo
Species you are applying to play: Vaurca
What color do you plan on making your first alien character: RGB 11, 43, 27
Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question.

Why do you wish to play this specific race:
I liked RPing with Vaurca on station, so I’ve read the lore myself and decided to apply.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:
What makes it different is that Vaurca are separated in bound and unbound, with unbound being capable of making rational decisions like a human, an interesting aspect that differs them from humans is that they spend most of their time in VR, and loathe being out of it, and while they are emotionally as capable as humans, they are not very competitive or ambitious, as Vaurca tend to be collectivists.
Bounds are very different from humans, as they are essentially brainless slaves who only serve to execute orders and are heavily specialized in their own assigned function.

Character Name:Ka'Akaix'Kuzi K'lax
Please provide a short backstory for this character
Being from Zkaii'xay'yil’s brood, Kuzi is a six foot tall young worker. Trained in tunnel engineering very often assigned to Tret’s mining tunnels alongside bound of the hive, sketching plans, making sure equipment is moved to where it’s needed, marking digsites and constructing tunnels are just a few of Kuzi’s duties as an engineer.
Compared to other Vaurca, Kuzi spends little time in VR due it being mostly used by the brood’s warriors for training. They however are a firm believer in pantheons and still believe the Great Mother K’lax is alive and will return someday.
Recently, they have been reassigned to move to Mendell with a work visa in an effort to establish a foothold for the brood there. Using their skills in construction and engineering, they hope to apply for a job opening as an apprentice in the NSS Aurora.

What do you like about this character?
I like that differently from most Vaurca, this one is detached from VR and spends most of their time outside of it.
How would you rate your role-playing ability?
I’d say it’s good enough
Notes:

Edited November 14, 2020 by Flpfs
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[JamOfBoy]

This is barebones and distinctly low effort. The backstory doesn't tell me anything about who Kuzi is as an individual, only what they do and why they do it, what job they'll do on the Aurora. This isn't creative.

With no feedback to back you up, I can't accept this. Application denied.

You're free to reapply whenever you wish.