Connorjg1 Posted December 29, 2020 Posted December 29, 2020 Type (e.g. Planet, Faction, System): Republic of Biesel Law Enforcement Agency Describe this proposal in a single sentence (12 word maximum): Give lore to a commonly referenced organization allowing more structure for use How will this be reflected on-station?: Outside of the occasional FIB investigation and visits that already happen this can be shown as part of a character's backstory or future aspirations. Does this faction/etc do anything not achieved by what already exists?: Yes. This organisation is already shown to exist but is as of currently not given any structure and exists in a sort of "No one knows anything about it" space where it only shows up as required without any sort of explanation of how it operates Why should this be given to lore developers rather than remain player created lore?: As the FIB is a major and reasonably common presence in the Republic as well as on the station directly. By providing it lore I hope it helps inspire future backstories and event use. Player created lore tends to be very centralized and will only ever be used by the player and possibly a handful of others. This is not ideal for an organisation that many players might interact with either via events or other presence on station as leaving it open leads to everyone having different conclusions which can and has lead to confusion in the past where two players views of exactly what the internal workings of an organisation are collide Do you understand that if this is submitted, you are signing it away to the lore team, and that it's possible that it will change over time in ways that you may not forsee?: Yes I understand this and find it perfectly reasonable. I can only hope the basis I provide is helpful Long Description: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O7uco11KMFPMH-7D6keYeyHiqFHBF8JyAgBAiWsHnQA/edit?usp=drivesdk
NewOriginalSchwann Posted October 9, 2021 Posted October 9, 2021 This application is being denied. While the writing here is good, the organization you've written is too similar to the real-world FBI.
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