Ro3ger's Tarja Whitelist Request

[ro3ger]

BYOND Key: Ro3ger

Character Names: Dylan Rakhya(surgeon)   Alex Darkwood(EMT)   May Blyana(sec)    Armen Alexeyev(operations)     July Darkwood(sci assistant)

Species you are applying to play: Tajara-Zhan-Khazan

What color do you plan on making your first alien character: Beaver brown #9f8b70

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: I wouldn't apply if I hadn't

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format.

One paragraph minimum per question. Why do you wish to play this specific race:

I tend to want to play fluffier kinds of races on SS13. Human and all is fine and all but the fun thing about playing a role play game is acting as something not yourself, A 5ft 152cm brownish colored Tarja that has to convince people that their claws, most likely having to show them being clipped or shaven down into dull points. Tarjas have a intensely well written backstory and descriptions of their past  which makes creating a character a lot of fun.

 

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:     Not including the mechanical differences, the effects of the command structure would be very prevalent in the way Tajara's act as they tend to be very loyal due to their huge history of monarchs. Unlike humans which have basically become a unknown on how most of them will act purely because of their rapid expanse across millions of worlds while the Tarja are compressed to one planet so their personality's, religions and family's are extremely secluded(The Inbreeding didn't help them)  

Character Name: Rajjurl El-Hasem

Please provide a short backstory for this character:

Born in 2429 CE. Growing up in a world that was just getting used to new technology was at a young age interested in the medical science of foreigners as it gave them the ability to come back from what was essentially death, only being able to study such things from the occasional hospital visit or passing by EMT's. At the age of 20 when the 2nd revolution began mostly ignored all of it instead taking minor courses in CQC and firearms and continuing his study's of the medical documents and information he had obtained from his homeplanet and forgien influences 98% nanotrasen.

In 2460 after getting the now Dr.Khazan had worked as a intern in a unspecified hospital on Adhomai after working for 5 years met with Nanotrasen representative's requesting work off his home world and was shortly accepted as a surgeon working aboard many stations for Nanotrasen usually only staying on a station for about 2 months before being re-assigned to a new one.   *Incident Report NT-25245-WJNE* :2463/11/05::11:56PM Local time: Aboard the NSS Excellence: After a incident where many casualty's were reported, Suspect Tajara-Zhan-Khazan(Surgeon) and Ruth Hubbard(Engineer) were found engaged in a brawl in surgical room 5. Security camera footage was unavailable but foul play on both parts are to be suspected the patient in the room was under so couldn't testify.  *Testimony*  Interviewer: Investigator Brandon Mcclark: Suspect:Tajara-Zhan-Khazan: "This is investigator Brandon Mcclark following up on incident 25245 dash wjne. I am here with doctor Khazan" "He is Doctor Khazan" "That is correct. Now can you please tell me what happened in in the surgical room?" "He was performing a internal organ repair after they were shot 3 times" "and?" "Engineer Ruth had broken in as he was mid surgery demanding he stop and let the injured die on the table" "And you weren't taking out their brain?" "I wouldn't. That would kill them" "Right... well we are going to be holding you in custody until this case is resolved. Guards!" "Why is he not being believed?" *Tape abruptly ends"    Evidence found that Ruth Hubbard broke into surgical room 5 all events after are unclear. Results are a warning to Ruth and a disciplinary hearing for Dr.Hasem

Transfer Notice: Chief Medical Officer, Joey Maddox:  "I will not stand for a murder on my team im just glad that brave engineer arrived when they did as I all ways trust the humans over these damn Tarjan mother fuckers. Get him off this ship send him to somewhere else so they can deal with him."     (((Note this is complete racism towards Rajjurl))))

What do you like about this character?  7-8 out of 10 as durring times of combat it may be hard to talk but I can easily RP out of combat

Notes: I only included my characters that i have played more than once and have actually even played within the last 5 months at the least.

Also good work on the lore there is SO MUCH of it and its amazing *clap

[Alberyk]

10 hours ago, ro3ger said:

Beaver brown #9f8b70

This is a Hharar color.

10 hours ago, ro3ger said:

At the age of 20 when the 2nd revolution began mostly ignored all of it instead

The second revolution is one of the most important events in the Tajaran history, Can't really just ignore it.

10 hours ago, ro3ger said:

He is Doctor Khazan

Unsure why he would refer to himself like that.

The application has little to no Tajaran lore elements in it alongside with a couple of big errors. You should incorporate the lore and Tajaran events way more when making a character. It is hard to say that you are interested in the lore when your character ignores it and you don't make use of it when writing the application.

Application denied.