[Denied] IPC app

[Wimiko]

BYOND Key: (Wiimiko) Character Names: (Pheonix Sulius) Species you are applying to play: (IPC) What color do you plan on making your first alien character: (Color of your character; Dionaea & IPCs exempt) Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:I did
Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question. Why do you wish to play this specific race: Well I really like the concept of a IPC that's "Sensitive" to different species. It wont be self antag but its gonna be skeptical? That makes sense right? So its gonna be faster to the gun for example the Dionea or Skrell. It is also cool to be like the scouts from the movie "Chappie" to be a shield of some kind but with a twist like a humor module. I also just really like robots...



Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: (One Paragraph minimum)
Analyzing, Unbreathing, Unnatural. That's what sums up IPCs. They can go into dangerous environments that humans cannot go to, like space. They also can be cold and inhuman and have no remorse for human life. They can also be modified in a plug and play in a way or repaired in some cases more easily then humans.



Character Name: S-52 Nickname 52

 

Please provide a short backstory for this character: Being first deployed at sector β being a guard bot in the Eridani Federation as a all purpose security robot being hostile to Dregs as they caused the most trouble. He was transferred to PMCG working for index security solutions being relocated multiple times around different ships colonies and stations. 

He has shown significant  talent in forensic science and general security. There have been some accidents where he shown increased increased skepticism toward Skrell and other non humans the level of skepticism is increased as the more un human is the said race. This is probably a product of his years as his time in sector β. He is currently under the owner ship of PMCG.

Notes: This can backstory can be considered "crude" by some and also probably has some punctuation errors and probably some other grammatical stuff as English is my second language. But anyway I hope you like my application I could work a little more in the lore section but yeah.

Edited May 12, 2022 by The lancer

[Wimiko]

I just realised my app is way too small

 

[The lancer]

Yes, unfortunately. You need to reapply and flesh out the character a lot more.