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The lancer

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  1. Hi, Owned IPCs everywhere, but especially in Sol, cannot change their name at will. You'll need to come up with some explanation for it. Also, the Trinary is not based on Earth, rather the coalition with a presence there and on Biesel.
  2. The backstory still doesn't provide insight to a personality of a proper character that's been around for two years. Megacorporation IPCs are forced to interact with their human supervisors as well as other IPCs like them, so just having them not really work with people is a bit odd and doesn't provide anything interesting for us to judge if we can trust you to play an IPC around people on the station. You also appear to have changed your backstory to be one of a Zavodskoi unit than an Idris one, without talking a about the harsh disciplinary methods that are an everyday reality for these IPCs. Lastly, the application format calls for approximately two paragraphs of background, not one. Please reapply with a better and more expansive backstory, one that provides more information on the personality of a character that wasn't planted into the world, but was molded by it and the experiences they've gathered. You may reapply in a week.
  3. Hi, thank you for applying. The application is a bit short, and there's parts that could use more expansion, like their treatment, place in society, and interactions with others. Hina's backstory is also a bit shorter than what's expected of an IPC that has essentially lived with humans, and doesn't say much about their personality or what they're like. It also doesn't mention how they ended up on the Aurora and what they actually work in. I recommend playing a bit more on the server and engaging with the community to get more accustomed, returning when you are more experienced with a more solid and expanded application.
  4. I'll be closing it since you didn't respond. You can reapply in a week.
  5. Hi, thanks for applying. Could you shed some light on what Damian actually did? Both in their free time and in their work. You mention they're a psychologist, but there's little elaboration on that. Also, how did he manage to manipulate his owners into basically taking financial advice from a psychologist IPC? The other part I'd like some more input is how IPCs are treated in general by society, and Damian's place in all this. How can an owned IPC go on its own and make arrangements for its future with a different megacorporation?
  6. Thanks for everything you've done all these years, I wish you the best as you move on.
  7. Hi, thanks for applying. Your character backstory leaves some things to be desired. It seems more centered around the owner than the IPC, of which we get no background for. When and why were they made? What have their experiences been, etc. The only real information we get out of this is that they are a good nurse and that they are a follower of the Trinary (with again, little to no information on how they came across it or how it affects them). Also yes, the slime-dealing is a bit unrealistic and should be written off in my opinion. My suggestion is to apply again in two weeks, with a different IPC character that isn't tied to any of your on station characters. Talk about them, their beginnings, experiences and how they ended up on the station, but as of now I cannot accept this application.
  8. People's accent doesn't really change within the span of a few months after being conquered or taken over by a different state, so I think the Biesel accent is accurate, same way we have New Gibson accent. As for the Republic's name, I always thought it was named the Republic of Tau Ceti. Turns out it's not but it would make more sense to be named that.
  9. Thanks for the application, but at this time, we feel that more wiki content of this kind for the trinary perfection is not required. You are free to use this as headcanon though.
  10. TO: Vuugix Quiin, Scientist, NSS Aurora FROM: AMS, CCIAAMS, NTCC Odin SUBJECT: RE: Incident Report -------------------- BODY: The investigation of this incident has concluded, and appropriate action has been taken for affected individuals. This matter will now be considered resolved. -------------------- DTG: 17-11:14-TAU CETI STANDARD-08-2463 SIGN: CCIABS Nguyen Dung
  11. Thank you for applying, though another candidate has been selected.
  12. Thank you for applying, though another candidate has been selected.
  13. TO: Mikolaj Talmarfaiiq, Cargo Technician, NSS Aurora FROM: Belj Delgrano, CCIAA, NTCC Odin SUBJECT: Incident Report -------------------- BODY: This is a message notifying you that your Incident Report will not be pursued. For future reference, we would like to direct you at our Translator and Integration Services, able to assist in the appropriate filing of internal documents and reports for a small fee. -------------------- DTG: 02-11:00-TAU CETI STANDARD-08-2463 SIGN: BeljDelgrano
  14. Hi, nice application, I like Morgan. Some technical issues that come up: How will she own this substantial property, if she herself is owned by someone else? Psychology is a bit complex, I doubt she would have picked up on it by just living with a psychologist and serving his patients. It is also not standard for IPCs to receive education and degrees, instead relying on data packs that install the skillset they need for a particular job, which acts as their qualification. So yeah I would take these into account and change her owner's will a bit. She can own property if she is free, but then that would not force her to find employment with NT.
  15. Along with the standard format: please provide an answer to the following. 1)How much time can you devote to lorewriting? 2)Do you have any plans for the lore? 3)Why do you want to join?
  16. TO: Vuugix Quiin, Scientist, NSS Aurora FROM: AMS, CCIAAMS, NTCC Odin SUBJECT: RE: Incident Report -------------------- BODY: This is an automated message to inform you that an investigation has now been opened regarding your incident report, and assigned to CCIABS Nguyen Dung (the lancer). You may be contacted by the CCIAA for an interview, or you may contact them directly if you have any questions. -------------------- DTG: 20-10:37-TAU CETI STANDARD-07-2463 SIGN: CCIAAMS
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