Vaurca species whitelist request,big ant

[CasualMemer]

BYOND Key: Casgam1. Character Names: Andrew Dooned. Species you are applying to play: Vaurca. What color do you plan on making your first alien character: Dark grey,regular ant. Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes. Why do you wish to play this specific race?:Because ants are cool,i love the concept and design. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: Simple sentences,not violent,not independent. Character Name:Ra'viax'le'zo'ra. Please provide a short backstory for this character: Born into a hive,queen orders them to seek employment,loved playing with big rocks at home,now manages big boxes. What do you like about this character?: Big ant hauling big boxes,big arms,small brain. How would you rate your role-playing ability?: Avarage.

[La Villa Strangiato]

Yo! I'm not super well-versed on Vaurca lore, but at a glance I think you need to flesh this app out a bit.

1. What specific thing do you like about the concept of Vaurca lore? What about the design?

2. What other things make a Vaurca different from a human? What about their biology differs them from a human? How does their mindset differ from that of a human? For bonus points, what's the difference between Akaix and Viax?

3. Which brood is Le from?

4. What are Zo'ra's relations with other hives? Where does most of the hive live in the Orion Spur?

[CasualMemer]

1.That they are the oldest surviving civilization and that they live underground in tunnels,maybe even the concept that they have VR training is nice. I like ants,and more human-like ants is a cool concept.

2: They breathe phoron,they have an exoskeleton allowing improved resistance against radiation and attacks,while warriors have a slightly weaker one for extra mobility,i would prefer to play as a Bound (Viax) as i would like to adapt to the idea of not being independent while preferring to not be hostile. Akaix are unbound,free thinkers,very human-brained while Viax are more acclimated towards the ''hivemind'' idea.

3: The Xakt brood.

4: i will put an emphasis on the ''are'' in the question and reply in the lore ''current time'':  The Zo'ra were quite a,neutral,i would say force in the wars,as they together with the C'thur developed the Court of Queens, The Lii'dra having attacked The Zo'rane plate through the Ryitu'kya Abyss in The Great Hive War,i would say Zo'ra never intentionally tried to start wars,was just acting defensively like the lobotomized and optimized Vaurca citizens. Most of the Zo'ra hive lives on the desert planet,Luthien

[Caelphon]

Hi there, this applications needs some significant revamping if you'd like this to be taken seriously.

You'll note certain questions require a paragraph minimum, which you have not adhered to. Additionally, the background story needs to be a minimum of two paragraphs which you have not complied with.

Please, fix these and then possibly you might have a chance of getting the whitelist, however, do not be suprised if you do not get it if you do not fix it.