[Declined] The Green Gamer's IPC app.

[The Green Gamer]

BYOND Key: The Green Gamer

Character Names: Daniel Smith

Species you are applying to play: PIC

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): NA

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: yes

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Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question

Why do you wish to play this specific race: Because its opens what i can roleplay and do in game and i have always liked robots but felt the borg laws where too tight for normal play. I think IPCs allow for brake from normal play which is good and i think IPCs are the most non huamn but not too hard to play. The crew will understand a IPCs actions more as robots are everywhere in fiction which allows for fluid role play.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: As a robot you wont be seen as on the same level on the level as the rest of the crew so it would challage to a round. It also allowes you to play with a logical chatracter and be able to look at thing in a differnet light then even other non humans.

Character Name: SREU M-E ( Self-Reliant Eradication unit)

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

SREU M-E was is a SREU unit which was a old model made for comabt which was phased out as it could not handdle engey or laser guns. He was stored in a werehouse untilll he was purchased and was turned into a engineering IPC but the upgrade made him selth aware> he escaped using his milltary programming and started to work for NT to have a *life* he was never ment to have.

He thinks and acts logical in most cases as thats what he is used to but some topics make him show he new found emtions such as the treament of IPCs.

What do you like about this character? He will make me able to try to play in a way i have not done beore and will give me a *lore* reason to go engineer or sec. he alos alowes me not to be 100% useless in combat.

How would you rate your role-playing ability? I can RP okay and can stay in character most of the time. With this chracter i will try to use more /me.

Edited May 31, 2016 by Guest

[ArcBot]

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question.

Please at least put more then one sentence. ;p

[The Green Gamer]

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question.

Please at least put more then one sentence. ;p

I have added more but i dont know how to write anymore with out reapteting it.

[Juani2400]

You should really fix the application. Regarding the format, It's all in bold, plus way too many grammar mistakes. Also, the backstory seems really short to me.

-1 from me, for now. Once you fix it, I'll see about giving it a +1.

[rrrrrr]

I'm with Juan Hernandez, Mapper. You should probably work on fixing the formatting and expand the backstory a little bit. Aside from that, it's looking positive!

Seriously. I need help. This is not an existence.

[Guest Marlon Phoenix]

Hello! Sorry for the delay.

Your application is rather short and you have negative feedback that echo my own stances when I read your application. The formatting is rather clunky, and the backstory is very bare-bones. I don't really see a lot of material that I can use to justify looking over negative feedback we have here. I encourage you to reapply in the future after you get more experience in the Aurora community.