New Planet Lore Application -- Community Input Required Before Submission

[veradox]

 

The following google document will link towards the proposed new planet, outside of the Tau Ceti region aimed towards the creation of a stronger background lore for better character foundations and reasoning behind other corporation wealth or whathaveyou. It will be a single step forward in making cool additions to the lore.

Below is two days of work and slacking to produce an unfinished initial draft of (as of the time of this post) just the geographical summary and main center points of the new planet idea.

Community input is desired, requested, and demanded. Makes it look cooler, and the more good content and viability, the greater the chance for it to be accepted. Discord DM for really important discussion and interest.

More information regarding the design is within, comments are permitted on this document. Posting on the forum itself helps, too!

Extreme revamping is possible. This is a design aimed towards creating a usable and feasible area for development of the lore, not a niche planet following a single wet dream.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BywwPvlmNAntJDjxr-9c1hhcGR2ONQCAB9CbfCK3_Vw/edit?usp=sharing

Edited December 10, 2016 by Guest

[Bedshaped]

I would love to implement this planet

[Bokaza]

What a pisshole of a planet. Which is why I like it. Our lore does not stress the value of garden worlds and the complexity of terraforming enough. There should be more places like this. With that in mind, I would suggest you remove any attempts to terraform it from the info. It would be like trying to store hay in a burning barn: Shit is far too unstable to support life at any level above simple microbial.

Next, the insistance on obsidian. It's a pretty useless stone. It's not even a gemstone. But I guess massive deposits of it can allow it to be exported as a construction stone. However, native iron is pretty rare and is more valuable for alloys other than regular steel. This can be a good source of income since steel is cheap as dirt at this point.

Lastly, you should add gravity and temperature ranges of the planet. And where the cities are located and why not somewhere else.

Otherwise, love the detail on the day to day life. That should the primary focus of any planet page, me thinks.