[Denied] poke-one's head whitelist application

[meega01782]

BYOND key: poke-one

Character names: lou winton

How long have you been playing on Aurora?: I'm not sure but enough to know the station map pretty well, and I think I roleplay good, at worst its decent

Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?: because I think that's the only way I can play internal affairs

Why did you come to Aurora?: because it was the only server I could find with the internal affairs job

Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?: yes

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each.

Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: roleplaying is, essentially, creating a character and acting like you are that character and never acknowledging the fact that your in a game, atleast not in OOC

What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, in game?:their IC purpose to make sure the workers in your department are doing the IC job, but I'm not sure what the OOC purpose In game, what does that even mean? making sure to stay IC?

What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: what is that even supposed to mean? OOC responsibilities to other players and how I would uphold them? that doesn't make sense what does it mean?

Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions.

Character name: lou winton

Character age:32

Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): ) lou winton isn't a complicated man, he's just a worker on the space station who likes to make lighthearted, dirty, and dark jokes

lou winton may not have even been allowed to look at space training but he knows how to give orders, tries to keep departments organized via paperwork, and knows how to deal with SSD crew members all while being funny

What do you like about this character?: that he's mainly if I were ever to somehow work on a space station

What do you dislike about this character?: wha- nothing its literally just me without my name

What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: well like that biography said, I try to keep departments organized and know how to deal with SSD crew members if they are an important role

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions.

How would you rate your own roleplaying?: I don't remember last time I said something OOC and I act like a normal worker just in space and not like and astronaut who has to be professional literally all the time, so pretty good

[Muncorn]

Can you fix your formatting please. I don't know what you managed to do, but you're missing Bold everywhere and it thus makes this quite awful to try and read. Additionally, by short biography it doesn't mean one sentence. You want to include training, backstory, why they work on the station and if you wish some details on the personality of the character.

[TishinaStalker]

This is the worst application I have ever had the displeasure of laying my eyes on so far. If this isn't fixed to be a genuinely good application in the next three days, then I'm denying it first chance I get.

[Blingx3]

Jessus christ all might, okay.. Ummm. I really don't know what to say, but this is terrible. Try looking at other applications to get a sense on how an app is written.

have a nice day.

[Radioaction]

Capitalization.

[TishinaStalker]

Application denied.