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  1. Hi, sorry for the late reply I'm back at university so things have been hectic. Nothing stands out to me on the app, but I do have a couple of questions: How does your character feel about the Federation? How does your character feel about Diona and C'thur in the Federation? As a follow-up, how do they feel about the other races of the Spur? How does your character feel about Skrell born outside of the Federation? What is your character's SCI rating? What religion does your character follow? Can you elaborate on how psionics and the Wake/Nlom impact your character/Skrell as a whole? Again, sorry for the lateness. Once you've answered these questions I'll try to process your app as quick as I can.
  2. Hi, thanks for applying. Sorry I didn't get to this sooner. I've read through and can't see anything of concern. Thought was definitely put into the app. That said, I still have some questions: How does your character feel about Skrell born outside of the Federation? Considering their involvement in the recent independence movement conflict in the Traverse, how does your character feel about the Traverse/those that dwell in it? How does your character view Diona and C'thur? How does your character view species outside of the Federation? What religion does your character follow?
  3. Hi, thanks for applying. I've read through the proposal, and I like the general concept. I don't have much to say on it at the moment. Feel free to change or expand on it as you like or in response to feedback from others, as long as you update this application to let us know that you've changed things. Other than that I have a few questions: Could you expand on your thoughts on the Federation? Do you have any ideas on what could be done/written about? It doesn't have to be anything in-depth or planned out. How do you feel about working as part of the larger lore team? We're typically asked to contribute to larger, non-species-specific lore projects. Would there be any issues with that? For the Skrell team, it's not uncommon for us to work closely with the Diona and Vaurca teams. While we don't expect encyclopedic knowledge, how do you feel about your species knowledge for these two species specifically? Criticism of your work is to be expected, both internally from team members and from the players. Do you believe there'll be any issues in that respect? Are you able to work by yourself? A lot of our work is collaborative, but sometimes you may find yourself working solo on a project before presenting it to the team. I may have more questions at some point, but this is it for now. Good luck.
  4. Meant to do this before I went to bed. Obviously that didn't happen. Approved.
  5. After discussing it, we're not comfortable with the VA part of the backstory. Nothing needs to be changed with the application, just don't use it going forward in your character's backstory.
  6. Hi, thanks for applying. I have some reservations about the character's involvement in Swimstars, even though it's minor. I've asked the loremasters and my deputy for clarification and to see how we generally feel about it. I'll post again once we've discussed it. This was done after you posted your application but I thought it would be worth mentioning as well, the Social Credit System has been renamed to the Social Compatability Index. I'm not asking you to change anything in the app regarding that obviously, I'm just making sure that you're aware of the change. Other than that I do have some questions regarding your character: Are they a listener or a receiver? How do they generally feel about the Federation? Taking into consideration their and their family's involvement in politics and their SCI rating. Can you talk more about how they feel about non-Skrell? You've touched on humanity already, could you talk more about the other species at all? Do they feel differently about Diona and C'thur considering their place in the Federation? What faith does Livix'x follow? Do they follow Kir'gul or Suur'ka alongside their faith? How do they feel about Skrell living outside of the Federation? How do they feel about the Tattuqig population that left as part of Weibii's exodus?
  7. Hi, thanks for applying. A few things: Skrell cannot smile, frown, etc. The wiki says that they lack significant facial muscles. Your character backstory does not mention much about their life within the Federation, and halfway through they end up in Silversun. For Skrell applications, we ask that characters are from the Nralakk Federation so that applicants can properly showcase their knowledge of Skrell lore, which the Federation is a large part of. From what I have been told you've very recently returned to Aurora. We ask players to have some playtime before applying for whitelists so that feedback can be given by the community, as well as showcasing your roleplaying ability and that you're able to follow the server's rules. I'll be denying this application for now. I suggest reading accepted Skrell apps and joining the lore discord so that you can discuss the server's lore and Skrell lore with other players. You can reapply in a week.
  8. Hi, thanks for applying. I can't see anything of concern in the app itself, but I will point out that Skrell body colours aren't heavily restricted. What's on the wiki is more of a baseline for natural colourations, but Skrell can be whatever they like within reason. Other than that I have a few questions: How does Alusuxa feel about Diona and Vaurca? How does Alusuxa feel about Skrell born outside of the Federation? How does Alusuxa feel about Humanity/other species in the Spur, particularly the idea of working with them while abroad? What is their job going to be on the Horizon?
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