Simfantic's Deputy Lore Dev App (Skrell)

[simfantic]

Ckey/BYOND Username: Simfantic

Position Being Applied For: Deputy Lore developer

Past Experiences/Knowledge: I did some lore writing ages ago for another server, I can't seem to find it which is basically as good as saying you don't have any. 

Examples of Past Work: N/A

Additional Comments:

My essay  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cmFVeQPaZjgPHThcWjRgyObO_zrvbMx3uIC0yipoJO4/edit?usp=sharing

[Mofo1995]

Hello! We're looking for a skrell lore developer rather than skrell lore deputies. Did you mean to apply for developer, or did you want this to wait as a deputy application until a lore developer is chosen?

[VTCobaltblood]

So, how does this demonstrate your understanding of the skrell lore or the direction you're going to be taking it in?

[JamOfBoy]

Your horoscope names are just months with some apostrophes and some letters thrown in or replaced. In all honesty, I find your essay content to be incredibly uninspired and bland, while simultaneously confusing. You say the cycles are a year, but also that they last ten. I'm sure you can do better than Oqtober skrell are cold-hearted. This really doesn't demonstrate your capability to write creatively.

[simfantic]

10 hours ago, JamOfBoy said:

Your horoscope names are just months with some apostrophes and some letters thrown in or replaced. In all honesty, I find your essay content to be incredibly uninspired and bland, while simultaneously confusing. You say the cycles are a year, but also that they last ten. I'm sure you can do better than Oqtober skrell are cold-hearted. This really doesn't demonstrate your capability to write creatively.

I actually wrote this extremely long ago, but I used the names that the wiki had provided at the time. Again, just ideas. 

[simfantic]

10 hours ago, VTCobaltblood said:

So, how does this demonstrate your understanding of the skrell lore or the direction you're going to be taking it in?

I may not have conveyed it correctly, but for a species that views the Stars as a sort of diety but doesn't have horoscopes, is it really weird.

[simfantic]

11 hours ago, Mofo1995 said:

Hello! We're looking for a skrell lore developer rather than skrell lore deputies. Did you mean to apply for developer, or did you want this to wait as a deputy application until a lore developer is chosen?

I believe I misread that completely, don't stress I'll wait for deputy and touch my essay up in the mean time  

[Mofo1995]

This application is being closed, as currently the skrell team is fully staffed. Thank you for your interest, and keep your eyes peeled for openings in the future! ?