[Denied]Noobetski's Dionae whitelist application

[Noobetski]

BYOND Key: Noobetski
Character Names:  John Neves, any role.
Species you are applying to play: Dionae
What color do you plan on making your first alien character: Dionae is exception
Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes, lot of times
Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question.
Why do you wish to play this specific race: Dionae have interesting history and character, also i think i can 
Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: 
They are slow, have special language that only they can access and need light or radiation to stay alive, their intelligence raises the more nymphs dionae have
Character Name: Warming light of the stars
Please provide a short backstory for this character:
  Warming light of the stars was born on Moghes as part of bigger, split gestalt, was in symbiosis with Unathi.
 
  Warming light of the star become friends with this Unathi.

  One Day, this Unathi, was talking to his friend, and after this he had and idea, leave planet via Nanotrasen built port.
 
  After several days Unathi and his friend dionea flew through Nanotrasen built port where he was given contract, same with our hero, dionae, Warming light of the stars


What do you like about this character? (Describe what you like about this character)
He could make friend with Unathi. Also he has been given contract in Nanotrasen, not everyone can do this.
How would you rate your role-playing ability?:
5/10
Notes:
I'm very want to play as dionae, really.
It would be sad for me if i can't.
I would answer questions if you have any.

[Zundy]

In the nicest possible way - is this a real app? Just want to know so I can decide whether to give you some constructive criticism or meme.

[Yonnimer]

Hello! I will have to ask the same question Zundy asked, are you serious about this? This is incredibly bare minimum for whitelist application. I'd suggest looking through some of the past dionae applications or asking questions on the dionae section of the lorehub discord, here: https://discord.gg/Sa48FBY

 

Your back story shows none of their personality, only a very, very bear minimum of where they came from. This greatly needs to be expanded/reworked. 

 

I'll leave this open for a few days if you wish to edit it here, or I can deny this application and let you write another.

[Yonnimer]

Denying due to a lack of response. You're free to reapply whenever.