jaydenfly1 Posted March 23, 2015 Share Posted March 23, 2015 (edited) BYOND Key:Jaydenfly1 Character Names: Timdl'gh delma'he How long have you been playing on Aurora: 2 days Species you are applying to play:Tajara What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):White Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes, sir. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I wanna play a unique race that is fun and looks awesome, I love cats myself and this looks like a cat I wanna play a cat person. I've played human it isn't a fun race. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:The way they talk, Their looks. Their culture. The way they live. Their names, Their planet Adhomai. Character Name:Timdl'gh delma'he Timdl'gh delma'he grow up on the outskirts of Adhomai, His family was a strict family who believed in honor and respect.Timdl'gh delma'he. When Timdl'gh delma'he was at school he learn how to Defend himself and how to heal himself. Soon after school Timdl'gh delma'he joined the Tajara military. As a reserve he seen no action infact Tajara has seen no action for awhile. After serving 10 years in the military as a reserve Timdl'gh delma'he desided to get a job on a space station. After 3 years of looking a space station was hiring. Timdl'gh delma'he applied for the job. After a week they accepted and Timdl'gh delma'he was sent off. His military background and his honor, Also he will look like a cat how cool How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate my role playing ability a good 7/10[/hr]Notes:I haven't been role playing for long Edited March 24, 2015 by Guest Link to comment
Rusty Shackleford Posted March 23, 2015 Share Posted March 23, 2015 You may want to put more work into that backstory. Also, you might want to give the our server's version of tajara lore a closer look. Link to comment
Susan Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 Reiterating what Rusty said; and please answer all the questions. Link to comment
Rusty Shackleford Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 Soon after school Timdl'gh delma'he joined the Tajara military. As a reserve he seen no action infact Tajara has seen no action for awhile. The reason I doubt you've read the lore page for Tajarans is because they've been embroiled in a bloody civil war for decades. http://aurorastation.org/wiki/index.php?title=Tajara Link to comment
VoltageHero Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 Not part of the lore or application team, but I'd suggest you add more flesh to your backstory too. Currently, it's kinda short and doesn't give much detail. The more detail, the better. Link to comment
Susan Posted March 24, 2015 Share Posted March 24, 2015 One paragraph minimum per question Also, Adhomai is currently embroiled in a Civil War and both the People's Army as well as the Liberation Army are mobilized and seeing active combat. He wouldn't have been allowed to leave the service in the past year. If you want him to have been discharged before then, that's fine, but there is ongoing fighting so it's highly unlikely they'd let anyone just go without him deserting and fleeing the planet. You might want to make his background a little more detailed. Link to comment
Jamini Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 That name is going to be murder to type. Link to comment
Susan Posted March 31, 2015 Share Posted March 31, 2015 Denied due to week of inactivity. Applicant can re-apply whenever. Link to comment
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