Boggle08 Posted February 1, 2022 Posted February 1, 2022 (edited) Type (e.g. Planet, Faction, System): Planet Addition Short Description: Fleshes out the Native Offworlder population of Burzsia, and incorporates Dionae. How will this be reflected on-station?: Adds more player backgrounds, gives context to some old ones. Does this addition do anything not achieved by what already exists?: Gives the native Burzsieans some proper world building, adds more material for Dionae. Do you understand that the project may change over time in ways that you may not foresee once it is handed over to the Lore Team?: This is a first draft, there are always alterations. Long Description: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1epOZAVSjqo79AR_hNTQB5lz-F66dPOr7MEWBoJQxtG0/edit?usp=sharing https://docs.google.com/document/d/16J1Pdqlyj7iXYLtGhgpryPrjK7uo89hY8hUHhq_F-dw/edit Notes: Took way longer than I hoped it would, but this is the last loose end of world building for Burzsia. The lore for the natives was too sparse, and people were asking questions about them no one could answer. If this goes through, I'll start slowly trickling in loadout shit for the planet, and then I can finally be done. For the sake of editing, I pretty much copy pasted the old article and put in my direct edits that way. Large changes made directly to the page are highlighted, though I did move some minor stuff around in un-highlighted sections to fit the new information. Edited February 1, 2022 by Boggle08
The lancer Posted March 20, 2022 Posted March 20, 2022 Hi, thank you for your application, but we will not going forward with it. It seems like too much of an expansion for a people with miniscule impact in the lore, while I am also unwilling to introduce a new faction to Burzsia as of now.
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