Faye <3 Posted May 21, 2022 Share Posted May 21, 2022 Lore Impact (Small/Medium/Large): Small Species: Human, Synthetic(?) Short Description: Medina Expansion How will this be reflected on-station?: More backgrounds for characters, more lore for a planet in Elyra. Does this addition do anything not achieved by what already exists?: It improves upon existing lore. Do you understand that the project may change over time in ways you may not foresee once it is handed over to the Lore Team? My writing is perfect, they won’t have to edit it. ❤️ Long desc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AE-gFpyn2350afELoI_SSSXgHOmN28N6oI0fszp-qEU/edit?usp=sharing Link to comment
Diggey Posted May 23, 2022 Share Posted May 23, 2022 Everything is internally consistent. I am just not sure where the Fashion comes from. Other than rich people. nothing about the way the cities work or operate implies to me that the native humans are perfectionists, I do not know where they get their gems from other than imports and synthesisation. It beeing represented in the Turaif fashion scene specifically though I buy wholeheartedly. Just maybe something going more into the divide between people seeking fortune in utilitarian gear and the natives who are above that and are capable of dressing in fancy oxygen suits. It seems a lot of the planet is populated by the destitute and those trying to keep them in check rather than people wearing cool sandveils. Also the difference between perfectionism and an interest in gemstones and artistic stitching. One is more artistically expressive, where if I read perfectionism I think like... Idealised human form with like porcelain masks and shapewear, which does not gel well, but that may be a wording issue as I am not a native speaker. Link to comment
Faye <3 Posted May 23, 2022 Author Share Posted May 23, 2022 3 hours ago, Diggey said: Everything is internally consistent. I am just not sure where the Fashion comes from. Other than rich people. nothing about the way the cities work or operate implies to me that the native humans are perfectionists, I do not know where they get their gems from other than imports and synthesisation. It beeing represented in the Turaif fashion scene specifically though I buy wholeheartedly. Just maybe something going more into the divide between people seeking fortune in utilitarian gear and the natives who are above that and are capable of dressing in fancy oxygen suits. It seems a lot of the planet is populated by the destitute and those trying to keep them in check rather than people wearing cool sandveils. Also the difference between perfectionism and an interest in gemstones and artistic stitching. One is more artistically expressive, where if I read perfectionism I think like... Idealised human form with like porcelain masks and shapewear, which does not gel well, but that may be a wording issue as I am not a native speaker. When placed in context of the entire page, it makes more sense. Link to comment
Diggey Posted May 25, 2022 Share Posted May 25, 2022 On 23/05/2022 at 07:06, Faye <3 said: When placed in context of the entire page, it makes more sense. True as I said it makes a lot of sense especially with Turaif. Just would like for it to maybe be a bit longer :3 Link to comment
NewOriginalSchwann Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 Accepted pending addition to the wiki. Link to comment
NewOriginalSchwann Posted June 6, 2022 Share Posted June 6, 2022 Added to the wiki, moving to fully accepted. Link to comment
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