SilverSZ Posted August 3, 2023 Share Posted August 3, 2023 Lore Impact (Small/Medium/Large): Medium Species: (Skrell, Tajara, Human, Vaurca, Dionae, Unathi, Synth, General): Human primarily, small amounts of Dominian Unathi. Short Description: Expands upon the concept of Knightly Orders in Dominia, providing a general description of their origins, organization and activities. And then provides details on four notable orders and 6 notable members each. How will this be reflected on-station?: Primarily by providing new background opportunities and elements for Dominian Characters of all social classes, though a minor PR I want to do along with this will allow Dominian characters to take a copy of the Dominian Loyalty Codex ingame as a loadout item to fit with the written lore. Does this addition do anything not achieved by what already exists?: It expands upon an element of Dominian society barely mentioned currently within the lore, creates several new lore characters for Dominia and expands upon other existing lore characters. Do you understand that the project may change over time in ways you may not foresee once it is handed over to the Lore Team? Of Course Long Description: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XtsVsVytR7OQ8vl4GmFZSfoN2jfFn7UPMR3_gbCHbPk/edit?usp=sharing Special Thanks goes to YourDaddy117/Big Papa for being someone to bounce ideas off and share bits with throughout the process. Schwann for actually saying they would want something on Knightly Orders in the first place pushing me write it. Lisek for also pushing me to finish it and providing the entries for notable figures Ludwig Odelheim, Valerio Caladius, Alojzia Molnarova, Kamilia Strelitz, Louis Caladius, Qu Zhao and Theodora Gottlieb. Which were all left mostly unedited from their very high quality original work. 3 Link to comment
LordPwner Posted August 24, 2023 Share Posted August 24, 2023 I love these, the fit Dominia and are so well thought out. I hope they get added soon so I can make my title even longer Link to comment
The7thLain Posted August 25, 2023 Share Posted August 25, 2023 Hi, thank you for the submission. This is good, however eight pages of knightly order lore is far too much for something that has a relatively minor role in Dominian society. It is hard to say what to cut without compromising a large part of what this application is, but the application would need to be about half of its current size if not smaller for us to consider accepting it as canon lore. Please make some cuts and reapply with this topic once they have been made. Link to comment
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