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BYOND Key:mirkoloio

Character Names:Eric McArthur, Jamison Stamos, Fabian/Janosch Goellstein, V.O.D.A.P.H.O.N.E ((Vampire Operated Defense Apparatus, Perpetrating Harm On Nefarious Entities, AI))

Species you are applying to play:Vaurca

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):That weird Bug Grey-yellow Color, don't know it's name

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes. More then once



Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question


Why do you wish to play this specific race:The Vaurca are a race I have been waiting for since they were announced first. They are Bug People and definetly will be fun to roleplay as new kinds of racism, RP and antagonistic things will be possible with them. I am sure a lot of fun will arise with Vaurca


Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:Roleplaying Vaurca is different due to the fact that they're a newly discovered Race. They're very different. Not only in speech but in their way of Action too. I can't just go and Play a Vaurca like a Human. Or like Stamos. ((I know I said I would, but we all know it's a joke.))

 



Character Name:Za'Akaix'Ghul

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

Za'Akaix'Ghul, Type BA unbound Vaurca, a warrior from Titan Prime. After establishing contact he was moved to Biesel, To Mendel City. Where he began his Training at the security academy, at least the Training for human Standards. To be able to use human machines, Technology and language. He learned fast with genuine interest and curiosity and was not seldom the target of racism. He worked, supporting himself in a small vaurca-compatible home and eventually managed to gain the Permit to be deployed as cadet on the NSS Exodus. He shared the Information with his hive and then was sent off to Biesel again, getting ready for his employment.


The time spent on the Exodus went well, untill a very racist barkeep decided to chase him with his shotgun. Of course, Za'Akaix'Ghul didn't quite like that and fought back after a bullet hit his third leg on his left side. He turned and literally bit the shotgun AND the man's Hand in half, incapacitating them. When explained to Superiors and Security officials they were understanding and arranged forms for him to be transfered to the Aurora. Shortly before his first day there he went back to the Hive, his knowledge being absorbed and Memory mostly wiped, the Exodus and it's Events forgotten....


What do you like about this character? I like that he's quite curious and knows how to handle himself. He's not afraid of learning new things and especially not of helping others. His genuine liking for the Human race make him a perfect Person to RP with.


How would you rate your role-playing ability? My roleplaying ability. Well, if I want to RP, I think I can do it quite good. But, you should judge. Not I.



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Alright, I'll provide some criticism.

Why do you wish to play this specific race:The Vaurca are a race I have been waiting for since they were announced first. They are Bug People and definetly will be fun to roleplay as new kinds of racism, RP and antagonistic things will be possible with them. I am sure a lot of fun will arise with Vaurca

I have some concerns around this. I may be outstretching my talent of omniscience by assuming how you're going to behave, but after all, I've been playing with you for over a year now. The thing is, your characters have a habit of reacting very violently to any form of conflict they get into. Correct me if I'm wrong, but this:

The time spent on the Exodus went well, untill a very racist barkeep decided to chase him with his shotgun. Of course, Za'Akaix'Ghul didn't quite like that and fought back after a bullet hit his third leg on his left side. He turned and literally bit the shotgun AND the man's Hand in half, incapacitating them.

Kinda... supports the notion that you may use the racism others may display as a validation for violent behavior. While that's all fine from an IC standpoint and roleplaying standards, the thing is that a creature that bites hands off of people that attack them would not be allowed onto a station that is notorious as a racist workplace. A notion, supported by the fact that DO's have to make announcements warning people not to say phrases like "Glass Adhomai". As a DO, I wouldn't let your Vaurca within 10 light years of Aurora.

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

Za'Akaix'Ghul, Type BA unbound Vaurca, a warrior from Titan Prime.

While your post-Titan history is well tought out, the pre-Titan bio is insufficiently long. When was your character born, how and what exactly did they fight, what weapons are they best trained at, etc. Stuff like that might need some improving.


Otherwise, I can begrudgingly say that Mirk is a very good RPer, when he makes an effort to try.

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This is a terrible application and Jamison Stamos is a terrible thing to Vaurcarize. REJECTED.

 

You weren't even there when I played Stamos... neither did I ever have any interaction with you...


Who are you, actually?


Also, People. I Need some more Feedback, please. Honest Feedback. No chucklefucking.

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I'm mostly worried about the possibility of Mirk being. Well, Mirk, with this. Given a species that has an ability to cause a large amount of damage to people in such a short amount of time. Even the backstory has an event where it took the arm off of somebody (yet still has a job).


When we implimented baseball bats, Mirk was the first player within ten minutes to almost kill somebody with one. As a non-antag. So, I'd say if this is accepted, a careful eye may wanted to be kept on him, due to his experience with these types of characters.

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I'm not sure if this is a thing, but I've always been under the impression that whitelists were a "easy to get, easy to lose" kind of deal. Mirk holds other whitelists to my knowledge. He is a veteran here, a fantastic roleplayer, a great source of roleplay and I believe would be a great bug, so long as he can keep his characters perverbial dick in its perverbial pants.


Don't listen top these homies, mirk bb, just make sure you use those pincers for good and not evil, yeah?


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