The writer, short story about the station known as "Purpose"

[Coalf]

As others have said the pacing was lacking, and I'm too lazy to re-read the whole thing and make the spaces better, thus I decided not to textwall this place place and instead put a pastebin link in here since it looks much better there, enjoy.

Warning, this stuff isn't cannon, or maybe it is I don't know mang, not for those weak of heart (don't ready this if you're a pussy)

http://pastebin.com/iYMk6h58

Post critique bellow.

k,thnx bye

Edited August 24, 2016 by Guest

[Bokaza]

TL;DR.

As a rule, give attention to written work based on the effort put into formatting. I dislike reading anything poorly formated. Your, while not horrible, isn't far off.

[Coalf]

TL;DR.

As a rule, give attention to written work based on the effort put into formatting. I dislike reading anything poorly formated. Your, while not horrible, isn't far off.

Noted, thank you.

It's kinda the job of me copying it from word to pastebin and then here which kinda compressed it but you're right, I should have thought about that too.

[Pyrociraptor]

The end, what a (neck) twist !

I have to say, even thought its a wall of text because of formatting (looked better on pastebin), its a good short story.

Even thought, for me, I kinda saw the end coming (or is it just me).

[Muncorn]

It's alright.

- Edit

It's fairly well written, and tomorrow I'll try and edit it so it has good punctuation and such, and so Writer is spelled correctly. I quite enjoyed it, though the ending was somewhat predictable. With a bit of work you could probably make some Asimov'esque stories, probably by removing the weird stuff and having more roboty thinking.