the_furry Posted December 15, 2014 Share Posted December 15, 2014 I am really not sure where I should post this so If I put it in the wrong place feel free to move it. I wanted everyones opinion of this employment record. This was my first attempt at creating one. Please keep a look out for discrepancies or things that don't make sense. Any suggestions on improvement would be welcome. The web format makes it look pretty hard to read though. NAME: TRAVIS DAVIS SEX: M DATE OF BIRTH: 17OCT2426 AGE: 30 EMPLOYMENT DATE: 06JAN2455 EMPLOYMENT BRANCH: CIVIL EMPLOYMENT DEPARTMENT: SCIENCE ACTIVE RANK: TELESCIENCIST INACTIVE RANK: XENOBIOLOGIST ENGINEER CLEARANCE: STAFF LEVEL HEIGHT: 155.448cm WEIGHT: 79kg BUILD: THIN DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: N/A HAIR: BLACK EYES: BLUE MENTAL STATUS: STABLE MEDICAL CONDITIONS: ADHD DYSTHYMIA MEDICAL HISTORY: 17OCT2426 BORN 21JUL24231 PSYCH EVAL PASSED DIAGNOSED ADHD INATTENTIVE TYPE 01FEB2436 FRACTURED RADIUS 21NOV2444 MULTIPLE LACERATIONS 05DEC2444 PSYCH EVAL FAIL DIAGNOSED DYSTHYMIA SEE ATTACH #01 05JUN2445 PSYCH EVAL FAIL 21DEC2445 PSYCH EVAL FAIL 15JUN2446 PSYCH EVAL PASS 17DEC2446 PSYCH EVAL FAIL 01JUN2447 PSYCH EVAL PASS 06DEC2447 PSYCH EVAL PASS 14JUN2448 PSYCH EVAL PASS 26DEC2448 PSYCH EVAL PASS SEE ATTACH #02 PLACE OF ORIGIN: SOL IV (MARS) NATIONALITY/CITIZENSHIPS: SOL ALLIANCE CURRENT RESIDENCES: BISESEL MENDELL CITY FAMILIAL STATUS: SINGLE CONFIRMED FAMILY: DAVIS, HENRY BIOLOGICAL FATHER ANDREWS, LINDA BIOLOGICAL MOTHER ANDREWS, STEVEN HALF BROTHER EDUCATION: MARS EDUCATION SYSTEM 1st TIER; 32nd PRIMARY SCHOOL; AGE 6-12 2nd TIER; 3rd SECONDARY SCHOOL; AGE 12-18 3rd TIER ; NA LUTHIEN INSTITUTE OF BLUESPACE TECH DOCTORATE; TELESCIENCE SPECIALIZATION: BLUESPACE XENOLOGY CERTIFICATIONS: MATTER CORE ENGINEERING SINGULARITY ENGINEERING MILITARY SERVICE RECORD: NA CIVIL SERVICE RECORD: NA CIVIL EMPLOYMENT RECORD: NA PRIOR QUALIFICATIONS: ADV EVA ADV TELEPAD ADV XENOBIOLOGY BASIC MATTER CORE ENGINE BASIC SINGULARITY ENGINE NANOTRASEN SERVICE RECORD: 06JAN2455 SUBCONTRACTED HEPHASESTUS IND. 10JAN2455 ASSIGN RSRCH. AND DEV XENOBIOLOGY NSS ANTLIA 15JUN2455 TRANSFERRED ASSIGN RSRCH. AND DEV TELESCIENTIST NSS ARA 03DEC2455 TRANSFERRED ASSIGN RERCH. AND DEV TELESCIENTIST NSS AURORA NANOTRASEN QUALIFICATIONS: ADV. RSRCH. AND DEV ADV. TELESCIENCE LABS ADV XENOBIOLOGY INTERM. ENGINEER ATTACHMENT #01 MARS EDUCATION SYSTEM 3RD DISTRICT LOCATION: MARS PATIENT: TRAVIS DAVIS DATE: 05DEC2444 RANKING DOCTOR: DR. EDMUND, GEORGE, PSYCHIATRIST DIAGNOSIS: DYSTHYMIA, PERSISTENT DEPRESSIVE DISORDER RANKING DOCTOR’S NOTES Educational system order patient for psychiatric examination after emergency response found the patient with multiple lacerations across his neck in an apparent attempt of suicide. Patient reports feelings of hopelessness due to current living conditions and domestic disputes between his parents. Patient scored high the depression category in ben-factors personality test. Patient identifies with four of five metrics in DSM. Further treatment for dysthymia prescribed. ATTACHMENT #02 LUTHIEN INSTITUTE OF BLUESPACE TECH LOCATION: LUTHIEN INSTITUTE PATIENT: TRAVIS DAVIS DATE: 26DEC2448 RANKING DOCTOR: DR. CHRISTOPH, CHARLES PSYCHIATRIST DIAGNOSIS: NA RANKING DOCTOR’S NOTES I am clearing Travis Davis of his prior diagnosis of dysthymia. Travis has continued to improve his condition to a functional level over the four year period I have monitored him. Mandatory Bi-yearly psychiatric evaluations and regular counseling sessions are no longer required. Private counseling is advised for other issues Travis has but dysthymia is no longer a concern. Quote Link to comment
Tenenza Posted December 15, 2014 Share Posted December 15, 2014 Theses are actually very good. I can really see you put a lot of effort in these. Quote Link to comment
Rechkalov Posted December 15, 2014 Share Posted December 15, 2014 Nicely done! It holds together well - my only objection would be an 'aesthetic' one, that is, the actual records themselves could use some sort of... how do you call it... well, just a point or a "-" in front of each entry, it can be a bit hard to look at. Otherwise, it's great and it works! And I absolutely like the number of times he failed his psych evals. It made me chuckle, and it does add to his character. *clap clap clap* Quote Link to comment
the_furry Posted December 16, 2014 Author Share Posted December 16, 2014 Yay! I'm glad to hear it. I'm randomly paranoid that I'm just bad at doing this. One thing I'm going to improve is the attachments I'll end up doing a full psych eval. And yes rechkalov I don't like the format on this. It's a lot cleaner on my pdf that I can't seem to upload Quote Link to comment
Rechkalov Posted December 16, 2014 Share Posted December 16, 2014 I would highly recommend composing your records on the forums. The game probably won't accept PDA formatting, either. Quote Link to comment
the_furry Posted December 17, 2014 Author Share Posted December 17, 2014 Yeah, I'll probably end up doing that but i also like having a clean copy saved on my comp. Quote Link to comment
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