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I feel like this character is making a lot of enemies and pissing a lot of people off. He's really stubborn, confrontational, and intransigent when it comes to what he believes in.


He's been in numerous arguments and spats with his coworkers over matters of conduct or regulation, as well as how things are done.


I didn't really intend to take the character in this direction, but his background of pretty much being raised to be an NT goon as well as his deeply rooted beliefs that the company is always in the right cause him to run into a lot of push back.


He also can be really blunt and forceful (not physical force usually, just very strict and demanding) with the people on the other end of the baton. He's never abused prisoners, but once he gets it in his head that someone is guilty or at wrong, it takes a LOT of effort to convince him otherwise. He also has a tendency to roll over whatever gets in his way of dispensing justice, which inevitably steps on some toes.


Despite all these things, he would never intentionally break regulation in any circumstance. He is however, prone to bending it for the "greater good" of NT, something which may get him in trouble in the future.



What are your thoughts on this character? Should I tone down how confrontational he is?

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Leonce will forever stay in my heart as an officer who met and guided me as a cadet through all the differences and basics of Aurora station when i first set foot on it, securing my transition from MRP to HRP

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