Guest Menown Posted June 15, 2017 Posted June 15, 2017 You've never played an alien before, so your first instinct is to name your character after your Byond key. The backstory you've presented is barren at best. You've basically taken "Zhans are seen as butchers, they lived in mountains" from the wiki and made that the entirety of his backstory on Adhomai, choosing instead to focus it on the fact he left Adhomai at seventeen and is now a planet-hopping space cat.
Coalf Posted June 16, 2017 Posted June 16, 2017 What Menown meant by that is. 1: Naming your character after your Ckey seems like self-inserting, something unfavorable in the roleplay community. 2: Just avoiding lore is not allowed in your application, one of he many reasons for these applications to exist is for people to show understanding of the lore and display that they're capable of playing the species up to snuff. 3: Your application is short, vague and all around horrible.
Mofo1995 Posted June 19, 2017 Posted June 19, 2017 N/A Application denied, then. Or retracted. Or what have you.
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