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BYOND Key: tzui5020

Character Names: Hans Jaeger, Sebastian Richter.

Species you are applying to play: Intigrated Positronic Chassis 

What color do you plan on making your first alien character: (Color of your character; Dionaea & IPCs exempt)

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question.

Why do you wish to play this specific race:

I want to play as an IPC because I think their Lore is Really intresting as diffrent groups View IPCs diffrently from normal Sentients and the Problem of Freedom every IPC most IPCs face and how IPC behaves is based upon its enviroment can Craft some Intresting characters and Especially that how an IPC can behave in its younger years can also be represented by their Corporations Goals and Ambitions and I want to make an Intresting character out of that.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: 

A Human also gets their Personalitys formed with their Enviroment but that is a protected enviroment usually so they tend to grow up with a personality, Friends, Brotherly Bonds sometimes even Relationships while an IPC atleast the one I want to make "grows" up with their Job and basically no Private life the only thing they have is their Programming and their Orders and that goes on for a Few years and The right from the Factory line Trying to do your Job right after you were "born" is a cool role-playing concept well what I want to say is that they don't inheritely have Feelings which develop over time.

Character Name: Liu-su (Zeng-Hu Mobility Frame)

Please provide a short backstory for this character: 

Liu-su is a Zeng-Hu Mobility Frame from Eridani I where Liu-su was put in a Mobility Frame and assigned to a Medical dispatch Team in ifihan where he grew to resent Eridani PMCs due to their inherent insistance on Liver Failure or Overdosing on Certain recreational drugs which caused him in Turn to Start counter advertising such to his Sentient Colleagues as it reduce their capability in responding to Emergency dispatches. Liu-su heared rumours under his colleagues about IPCs being able to attain freedom in Zeng-Hu if they work hard enough since then he is striving to be always be at his best and provide to patients the best he can as fast as he can to the point he can't sit still anymore and always thinks about "What about if someone gets Hurt and I'm not fast enough will the Company be dissapointed in me?" since then Liu-su is obsessed with perfection through speed and that his Non-Human colleagues are Just Slowing him down.

What do you like about this character? 

I usually determine how I like the Character after I've played them but I want to role-play Liu-su as an IPC that generally views Humans badly so he'll be a more of a "bad" style of character  which I have to still try and I can create some Intresting moments with his Oppsession of speed and how he wants to make the other medical staff just as "perfect" as him and I think I can roleplay that at about a 7 or 6 out of Ten.

Notes:

Feedback is always Appreciated.

(I'm sorry for the broken english)

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Howdy, a couple questions.

1. Which Eridani PMC was Liu-su part of?

2. Which megacity on Eridani I did Liu-su mainly operate on?

3. I'd like you to expand a little more on how synthetics are viewed in various parts of the Spur, particularly Elyra. How are IPCs viewed there, and what is a reason that they might be seen in that way in Elyra? Bonus points if you can find a similarity in the way that Dominians view synthetics.

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Hi Tzui! First of all, +1, love your characters and I think you'll be able to play an IPC correctly. Secondly, I need to do the thing where I ask people who play the characters I like additional questions on their whitelist app to help. (Hope I'm not overstepping, lore team.)

1. How does Liu-su view self-preservation and his personal goals?

2. How did Liu-su manage to get a job (or choose to sign a contract to work upon) with the Horizon?

3. What's Liu-su's current ownership status?

Good luck dude, I love Hans and Sebastian a bunch.

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Hello sorry for the Late answer

1. Liu-su was apart of Sekhmet Intergalatic as Liu-su is supposed to be a Medical IPC

2. Liu-su Mainly Operated in Ifihan which is the One that seems most like a normal city to me so I picked that.

3. On Elyra they View IPCs as Soulless like Dominia but unlike Dominia its more of a Distaste instead of the Hatered the dominians have, I believe they View them as if they were Soulless as they are Artfically created and Elyra being Religious to a large degree and IPC being Created by Humans and not Their God. So on Elyra there have formed Communitys of IPCs some of Them Try to assimilate but only to follow Elyrian customs as they are not Religious and The Artisans move away from the Elyrian communities that view them as Soulless and don't Participate in Elyrian Culture or Customs there is also a smaller group that are Religious but they are looked upon with skeptiscism and generally Viewed as Traitors and the Elyrian Isolationism also transfers to their Assimliation IPCs as they try to keep they're neighberhoods to themselves and View Humans that move in Badly.

(Forgot to mention but I think Demons count as soulless aswell just more Negative then Just soulless)

 

Thank you dessysalta Love your Characters too even if I don't Interact with them a lot sometimes (Vasquez is my Favorite) 

 

1. Liu-su contrary to my other characters is rather selfish and due to his obsession with trying to be as perfect as he can to make the Company proud he won't throw himself infront of Bullets anytime soon.

2. Liu-su wanted to be assigned to the SCCV horizon due to the Conglomerates prestigious reputation after he got brought onto Zeng-hu he asked to be assigned there and then he was.

3. Liu-su has a Handler tho I still have to decide on the Name and I plan to make him free down the Line but FAR down the Line

 

I hope all answers were satisfactory.

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Hi Tzui. Thank you for applying for a synth whitelist. A few questions, to follow up with what our DLM and Dessy asked:
 

  1. How did Liu-su manage to be transferred to Zeng-Hu from Sekhmet, knowing that competition between corporations in Eridani is cutthroat? What function did they perform with Zeng-Hu in Eridani before being transferred to the SCCV Horizon?
  2. What is the nature of Liu-su's handler? Are they a private owner, or appointed by Zeng-Hu? If the latter and it implies they are corporate-owned, #1's answer is important here.
  3. What does Liu-su think of working with Zeng-Hu versus Sekhmet? How do their feelings about their coworkers in Sekhmet compare to their coworkers in Zeng-Hu? Do they have any aspirations in regards to their career with Zeng-Hu?
  4. Does Liu-su have any personal aspirations outside of their employment that they wish to seek out? Over the years, how have they changed?

Take your time answering, there's no rush.

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Hello, Thank you for Responding

1. Due to Liu-su seeking out the Best he can be through all means necessary and him being Offensive to his colleagues for doing something often out of their control to the Point it became a problem to sekhmet Interstellars Clients so they put him up for sale and Zeng-hu bought Liu-su because Liu-su was running around with cutting edge technology and shares the same Views as the Corporation itself which Made him a Good show dog for the Company. With Zeng-Hu he was put in Medical dispatches with other Mobility Frames (He didn't act Like before because he felt more at Home with his Other Mobility Frame Colleagues instead of the Humans from Sekhmet) and was Dispatched to calls where Liu-su and the other mobility Frames had the Most Eyes on them (Like show dogs usually operate). After some time he was then assigned to the SCCV Horizon as it being a Vessel one of its kind and also gaining many Eyes from the public so Zeng-Hu assigned him there due to him being able to perform and show off their Newest Tech on an already Cutting Edge Vessel.( And no he didn't switch frames he was just upgraded constantly so he would be perfect like Zeng-Hu desires.)

2. Liu-su has a Handler appointed by Zeng-Hu. The Handler is Heavily Augmented so Liu-su generally has a Positive relationship with His handler.

3. Liu-su feels better working with Zeng-Hu as many Share his Views and his Co-workers also being Mobility frames that wouldn't endulge in the Behavior his Human Colleagues would resort to on a hard day with Sekhmet. Liu-su doesn't know that he is a show dog instead he still believes he is being Treated this way because he is an "above average IPC" in Liu-su's words.

4. Liu-su isn't that Old yet to have developed a lot but he Views IPCs and Augmented Humans above the Normal Humans and Doesn't Understand why Shells exist and why they look like Humans instead of Proudly showing off their Chassee and Frame.

 

I Hope all Answers were Satisfactory.

(Everything that I put in like this is to give a bit more context)

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Hi, thanks for applying. However I'll have to deny this application. You're very close but I'd like a more consistent background, based on the questions you answered here. Take some time to refine and put everything together in a new application, with a more extensive background.

Also make sure to include information about the positronic brain, and how IPC learning works. You can reapply in 3 days.

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