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Do you guys even read. :I

...That's not really what i meant. I just think the text should be clearer, and possibly have a color-coded background. Now that I'm used to seeing them, I don't think redundancy is as much of an issue, but the rest is.

Not exactly. The 30 years thing is on a case-by-case basis, and provided there's reasonable justification for it. Which. In this situation, I think there is. 28yo Captain would still never fly, though.

Application accepted.

Application accepted.

I'm also no longer voting on apps, for about the same reasons as Frances. My qualm with hair is not about appearance, but about the legitimate hazard it'd make when working around and in heavy machinery. And it doesn't invalidate the other things I brought up.

I will not be downvoting this app. However. I have a number of issues to raise. -Minor thing that's already been brought up: Yes. The hair is a problem. The hair length, not the color. I've seen Fortune frequently work Robotics; working with hair so long around heavy machinery like mechs is extremely dangerous, not to mention impractical. Cut it, put it in a bun, whatever, but don't tell me she magically keeps that tail from getting caught in anything, ever. -Potentially metagrudging, but I have never had a positive experience RPing with Fortune. It's not even love-to-hate, her personality is just abrasive, and immature. If she's old enough to be a head, she doesn't act her age. -As for backstory. I feel like much of it seems to be there 'just because' and doesn't really justify itself. There's no why, or explanation; -why- is she an artificial human? Why were her parents, or whoever, performing tests on her? Where'd the scars come from-- shouldn't it matter more why she has them, than the fact that she has them at all? -This app doesn't really say why Fortune would make a good head. No mention of her schooling or how she got to working where she is now, nothing selling why she'd make a good RD. You spend more time describing her pets than her personality. Yes, she's worked science. But like you mention in your paragraph responses, Heads of Staff need to be able to guide their departments, not do all the jobs.

Ehhhh. They're tiny, hard to read, and kinda redundant when the rank's already listed right above them in mostly the same wording. Text could be made larger and more crisp. For aesthetics, maybe color-code icon backgrounds to match staff rank (like, name color)? Might look more obnoxious than good, though.