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  1. One of the greatest interim research directors I have seen, Nice friendly knows the science division +1 from me good luck
  2. Boop I still want this if a spriter could work on it I would be grateful
  3. Yes you during a secret round around one week ago you told me and I believe two others to "fuck off do not tell me about my rp you are annoying shut up" if I remember correctly.
  4. +1 Nursie's Phoebe is one of the most hilarious and interesting characters to RP will, Nursie also shows that they can handle the responsibility of being a moderator, Good luck Nursie o/ or should I say Founder Ezzel?
  5. Your a great roleplayer, have a great history with roleplaying and the catbeasts have outnumbered the lizards for too long, +1, Good luck!
  6. BYOND key: LordRaven001 Character names: Characters: Night That Shatters Days, Embracing The Rain,Night That Obliterates Day, Akero'Ceyta Veeta'Pleat, Keta'Ceet Ple'Teh, Arthur Whitemane, WHITEMANE (Cyborg), Whitemane(ERT), Archon (AI),Azeir Sssinzar, Kota Vimleel, Thtithik Pakseech, Korlas Lassei, Za'Akaix Azaeah Zo'ra, Ka'Akaix Snowa Zo'ra, Ka'Viax Zotra Zo'Ra H.E.A.D (AI) H.E.A.D (Cyborg) Josiaph Vitilichi These are my main characters that I play, The characters that I play who are not listed as of 3/23/2016 are new characters that I have created or test characters to see if I like the style of RP. How long have you been playing on Aurora?: Two Months Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?: I wish to be on the whitelist so I can assist new players with the basics of medical and surgery and what our expectations of roleplay are within the server. Why did you come to Aurora?: I came to aurora because of the DO Corps and heavy roleplay, I found the DO Corps to be a very interesting aspect of heavy roleplay and intended on becoming one myself, Aswell as my heavy enjoyment for roleplay. Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?: Yes, I swear I've memorized the CMO Page. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: I think role play is escaping your real life world and implanting yourself in your own little world that you created were you can do anything and everything that helps release stress, anxiety, and real life troubles. As well as developing your own little person in there own little world that interacts with other people who enjoy roleplaying as much as you do. I think roleplay should be about having fun and escaping the real world, I use roleplay to forget about my high stress school work and high stress life just to relax and have fun, that's what I think it should be about. What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?: To help players with anything they require such as if the character I was making for my head of staff app was a research director I would be able to teach other players about the mechanics of research and development or toxicology in ooc/looc or if I was applying to be CMO (Which I am) I would help people with the medical mechanics such as surgery and medical doctor and inform them of our rules and what we expect as a server, So what I think the OOC purpose of a head of staff is, is helping the players around the server and with any questions. What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: I think one of the OOC responsibilities of whitelisted players is to teach, I enjoy SS13 and the server as a fun place that learning can take place and I wish to teach newer players what to do and how to do them, I also think the responsibilities of whitelisted players are to be respectful, nice and friendly to other players giving them a safe environment to immerse themselves in the roleplay. And how I would strive to uphold them is, Teaching new players the rules and were to get help if they need it, And try to cheer up the players. Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name: Kota Vimleel Character age: 65 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): Kota Vimleel grew up in a small clan in Moghes, It was a peaceful time on moghes, The Vimleel's were farmers who sold their crop on the local marketplace, until one day the clan mother bore her eggs after painstaking waiting a young male hatched, They named him Kota, after the peacefulness of the day, Kota was always set on helping people and being an advisor, It is what he set his heart and mind on, As he grew older helping around the farm he made his small wages on which he used those wages to purchase books/tomes and supplies to experiment with healing that's what he loved, His brother Sseinzar Vimleel was the main subject Kota practiced his medicine on, As Sseinzar was always a troubled child getting in fights breaking things, always cutting his scales, blackening his eyes, coming down with colds, Kota was always there to help and care for his brother as well as the other members of his clan, and allied clans he had a nickname "Sselizar Ssensair Ssosar" Or in basic "The Healing One" that is what he was called and addressed by around his clans. As he aged more and more he was praised for his healing arts and was studying on moghes medicine and shaman arts, It was a peaceful time and Kota was happy, That was until the bombs fell. During the bombing Kota was studying in what is now called the "Untouched lands" Safe from harm sadly the same could not be said for his clan, His clans farm was in the general vicinity of the bombings, It was obliterated killing his Birthing Mother, Birthing Father, and Clan Sister, his brother had went to visit Kota in the present day untouched lands, A day before the bombs fell. When the news reached Kota he dropped out of his schooling and went to fight in the war as a healer, Treating the injuries from the soldiers and officers, he did this until the war end, After the war he had a lengthy healing record and went to finish his education at a human university, Gaining three doctorates, One in Surgery, One in Medical Science, And one in chemistry, He had two bachelor degrees, One in virology and one in genetic studying. With his lengthy record and astounding degrees he applied for a position as a Medical Doctor at the station NSS Aurora, Were he proceeded to interim seventeen times as Chief Medical Officer during his interimships he had an attitude of "Do it correctly, Or do not do it at all" As-well as openly commenting on a poor job if one of the doctors did so. With that he decided with suggestions from his good friend, Doctor Phoebe Essel to apply for a Chief Medical Officer position. What do you like about this character?: HIs dedication to healing/helping people What do you dislike about this character?: His do it correctly or don't do it at all attitude, As-well as his willingness to insult you if you do your job bad. What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: His dedication and support to helping people, As-well as his suprising interimship records Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?: 8/10 Extra notes: Those seventeen interimships are a mix between extended and other game modes, I have only interimed 6 times on extended, I am in the middle of moving so please do not be offended if I do not reply instantantiously to your comments, I always enjoy your feedback and would love to hear it.
  7. I feel like you are not mature or friendly enough to be a head I frankly remember you getting angry and insulting myself and a few others in dead chat for giving you criticism about your rp, work on that for now its a -1 sorry
  8. Bound can't be any other job then civilian or service according to the race rules so they should not have the authority to arrest or release prisoners. Bound vaurca are only supervised by their hive they do not care about your rank on the space station everyone is of the same authority unless your a vaurca from that hive.
  9. When rounds don't even make it past one hour because of evacs that a non-antag (Slimes) caused it is dumb, Just check the damage numbers they do in the code, Plus there stun pounce is broken, If we reduce it that would be good, or Whitelist xenobiologist
  10. BYOND Key: LordRaven001 Character name: Za'Akaix'Azaeah Zo'ra Item name: Cigarette Holder Why is your character carrying said item to work?: It was a gift from one of his greatest friends Ka'Akaix'Zah Zo'ra, Before Zah left the Zo'ra hive he crafted this piece so Azaeah could remeber him and never forget the memories they spent together in Paradise and on the NSS Aurora. Item function(s): Exactly the same as a cigarette, Maybe infinite instead of extinguishing. Item description: Crafted with fine metal a couple of scratches from overuse, On the side it is engraved with the words "Dew Notckt Forgackt Mi- Zah" Item appearance: Additional comments: I do not know how to sprite so if someone could sprite it that would be lovely, Also with the functionality, If we can't make it Infinite the ability to replace Cigarettes when they extinguish would be lovely, I don't know how hard that is so hey.
  11. Byond key: LordRaven001 Character names: Night That Shatters Days, Embracing The Rain, Akero'Ceyta Veeta'Pleat, Keta'Ceet Ple'Teh, Arthur Whitemane, WHITEMANE (Cyborg), Whitemane(ERT), Archon (AI), H.E.A.D, (AI), Azeir Sssinzar, Kota Vimleel, Thtithik Pakseech, Korlas Lassei Special Roles/Antag Characters: PVT Whitemane (Space Marine), Tihichiehk "Tich" (Vox Raider), Archon (PAI) What times are you available? In GMT: any time not between 3:00AM to 9:30AM Do you have any experience with Moderating? Or similar. Yes, I have been a staff member on four team fortess two servers, Three Garrys mod servers , Two Minecraft servers, And it may not help but i've been a developer on one SS13 server that used baystation source. Why do you want to be a Duty Officer? I want to be a duty officer so I can further the roleplay of the CCIA style sourt of affairs, assist with the DO Character Complaints thread if YJGO allows it, Handle faxes and situations that occur, I always found it captivating that there was a job and a server group for set people to do that, Its one of the main reasons why I joined the server, I again enjoy the aspect of being a sourt of Lorekeeper, Gamemaster type of player who sits in the background until they are called upon and reply with my advice, I've always loved that sourt of playstyle, How well can you handle stress? Very Well What does it mean to be a Duty Officer? It means you help people are respectful, Answer faxes, assist with Character Complaints, Maintain a high quality of RP for players, Remain calm when handling situations end round, Watch over Central Command, Make it fun for the other players on the server, DO's are not here to be the barer of bad news but are here to make the game more interesting for other players, To offer advice,support and assistance with anything the crew faxes Central about, It is also a lot of responsibility so you have to be responsible, It requires understanding of the current Nanotransen guidelines,regulations and protocols aswell as knowing your boundaries/limits How active on the forums and server are you? Every day for three to seven hours. Anything else to add? This is one of the main reasons why I joined the server, If there is something wrong with this application please please please tell me so I can fix it, Thank you so much, for reading.
  12. Thank you for receding your -1, Seventy five percent of the reasons why I post an application is so I can hear feedback and improve my roleplay negative or positive ill always try to improve based upon it, At the end of the day we all come here to have fun playing a game, Thank you again.
  13. Hiya, I don't remember killing somebody as a non-antag or killing somebody even in general as Pakseech, I tend to play my characters as a non-killing type as killing ruins the round for other players, Could you please elaborate on which round this is so I can remember, Thanks again for your comment and if you give me more details on this whole incident I could hope to improve on it, Stating that I've killed somebody but not giving me tips or notifying me which round so I can explain the situation isn't constructive and I really would enjoy improving myself, Thanks again for your post, And the thing with Yinzr and his wife I was a Traitor at the time of that incident if I recall correctly, I didn't kill the bartender like he wanted me to, I didn't once lay a finger on him, I was put to sleep by Xinc for when I fought a security member, I was straight jacketed and handcuffed on the crew transfer shuttle. Pakseech is also one of those characters that I do not pride myself on and that I was using to test out different parts of the RP, After the CCIA Investigation I plan on retiring Pakseech as she causes more problems then solutions, Also my Original Unathi was Azeir Ssinzar who was a disgraced albino Unathi and I never used him in combat before, Can you please tell me were you got me stating that I enjoyed the combat system and honor gig, Your post has little to no constructive feedback to improve off of, If you could please reply with constructive things so I may improve my characters, Telling me that I wouldn't do good with a "Gore Bite" as you call it is quite offensive to me that you think I am only applying for this race because of a bite function, Not because of the RP it will bring. Pakseech is the only problem character I've had in my time on Aurora so if you could again send feedback so I may improve my other characters off of this learning experience, Thank you.
  14. Understood, Thank you so much for this constructive feedback. I will work on doing my duty more often and the grammar things. Pakseech is my character who is sort of a Test Character sort to speak, Not one of the characters I would pride myself on, Thank you again for your feedback,
  15. Thank you so much for this positive post Thesir, And your feedback, I try to make the round fun for everyone and not murder and kill on antag rounds but instead steal or imprison, Pakseech is one of my childish fun type of characters that I really just try to have fun with, Sometimes it people are doing stupid things I act moody on Pakseech, And archon is a sourt of friendly AI that the only time I play him other then AI Is to service drinks, So its also pretty cheery, Thank you again so much for this positive post.
  16. Thank you so much for your feedback Loow, I'll improve to make Pakseech less knowledgable at medical, I enjoy helping people and making sure the round is fun for everbody so when Medical staff are neglecting a dying patient I step in out of instinct Ill also make Pakseech less moody, The reason why Pakseech is always moody is because people always hurt his friends for no reason and he feels an oath to protect them, Ill read over my backstory and if I do not like it ill change it, But thank you so much for your feedback!
  17. BYOND Key: LordRaven001 Character Names: Night That Shatters Days, Embracing The Rain, Akero'Ceyta Veeta'Pleat, Keta'Ceet Ple'Teh, Arthur Whitemane, WHITEMANE (Cyborg), Whitemane(ERT), Archon (AI),Azeir Sssinzar, Kota Vimleel, Thtithik Pakseech, Korlas Lassei Special Roles/Antag Characters: PVT Whitemane (Space Marine), Tihichiehk "Tich" (Vox Raider), Archon (PAI) Species you are applying to play: Vaurca What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Black Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I want to play this specific race because I have always enjoyed the look of the Vaurca aswell as the mechanics and how they speak, There hive system is also pretty cool and I think I can roleplay it well, The lore is fantastic with the different hives clashing against each other ever since they were initated into the Server, Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: There are two types of Vaurca, Bound and Unbound, Bound Vaurca are like cyborgs, They do not have there own thought process or will and are completely controlled by the hive or people that order them, They can also only play civlian jobs with the exception of Engineering Apprentice and Medical Intern Then there is the unbound the more human aspect of the Vaurca, They can be any job and do anything, They do not have to listen to orders from anyone and are torn from the VR known as Paradise. Character Name: Za'Akaix'Azaeh Zo'ra Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs Ka'Akaix'Azaeh Zo'ra was torn from paradise, The shroud covering its eyes broken, Its dreams of remaining bound, Severed, It can no long serve the hive with the utmost obedience but it will still serve the hive, Yes, It will, When Ka'Akaix'Azaeh Zo'ra was torn from the veil of paradise it was a guard, warrior to fight for the many breeders in the clan protecting the eggs making sure no harm came to them from an enemy hive, This is what he was doing before its misfortune came, Once it arrived the dreaded day, It was pushed off, Unbound. When he had left paradise since he was of the Zo'Ra hive and there connection to Nanotransen he was sent to nanotransen to work on one of there space stations, Ka'Akaix'Azaeh Zo'ra who is specialized in guarding was placed into the security cadets after it finished its basic training they were elevated to the rank of Security officer, At that point they returned to the hive on a visitation hoping to take pleasure in paradise once again, Almost reaching its hive it met another one of its species a Vaurca by the name of Ka'Akaix'Zah Zo'ra they both were assigned to the same station they became friends, Destined to work for Nanotransen Ka'Akaix'Azaeh Zo'ra did not fight it and only accepted it, Living out its days working, guarding, watching. What do you like about this character? His resistance to being unbound only to accept it later by meeting another unbound as they are so rare in the Vaurca hives. How would you rate your role-playing ability? 8/10 Notes: I enjoy positive and negative feedback, It helps me learn and improve. (Sorry about my backstory I wrote this up when I was really tired from an all nighter, If its not good please give me some tips by posting a reply and I will surely improve off of it, Thank you again!)
  18. Do you have the logs of what I stated as well?, It would be beneficial if my statements were also said here, For logging and information purposes.
  19. I am not reporting Garn, I didn't know were to post to get a warning a second look at in attempts to have it repealed. so I chose here.
  20. BYOND Key: LordRaven001 Staff BYOND Key: Garnascus Reason for complaint: This is not a complaint it is a request for a second opinion on my warning, And if It was unjust to get it repealed, I do not know of a forum thread on were to Repeal a warning should be posted so I will post it here., I recently aquired a severe warning from Garnascus for "Claiming someone shot at them with a laser rifle without ever observing it. Used shaky circumstantial evidence to pin an antag for capture." This is more for my own record keeping but I have come here to ask Garn to post the logs of the admin conversation and see if this is a justified warning or not as well as to keep the logs in an additional file so I can review them to prevent the situation from occurring further. Thank you. Evidence/logs/etc: N/A Additional remarks: N/A
  21. Gotcha, Thank you so much Pump for your feedback, If I do get whitelisted I will take your suggestions into the RP, Later today I will update my backstory to include some of the struggles in his life due to his Albino skin trait, Thank you again Pump.
  22. Gotcha, Ill rewrite the backstory making it more fit for Security Officer, As well as work on my habit of quick violence in order to abolish it entirely, Also Night That Shatters Days was retired after the Vox Hiest round last night (1/29/2016) as he left to join the "Band of Traders", Thanks for your feedback it really helps. Ten years as a cadet, I'm pretty sure if a cadet is needing more than two years of cadetship, Something is probably terribly wrong with their performance and should probably not be considered an ideal candidate for an actual officer due to their inability to learn AND graduate from the rank. And with a grimdark backstory from what I can gather, him being the warden position would end up with harmbatoning of rowdy prisoners because PTSD. My advice is probably change his cadetship years and whatever you think might need some tuning up. Ok Ill rewrite that section remove the father and mothers death as well as the cadetship for ten years, Thank you again for your feedback it helps me out.
  23. BYOND Key: LordRaven001 Character Names:Night That Shatters Days, Akero'Ceyta Veeta'Pleat,Keta'Ceet Ple'Teh, Arthur Whitemane, WHITEMANE (Cyborg), Whitemane(ERT), Archon (AI), Archon (Cyborg), Archon (PAI) Species you are applying to play: Unathi What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Albino Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yep Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I want to play Unathi because of the characteristics and mannerisms, diet and appearance getting no nutrient from plants will be interesting as there is normally no chef. The culture. Their history is fascinating, The asthetic the way they walk and talk and the mechanics are also pretty interesting, Minor reduced damage from heat but increased reduced damage from cold will make them a challenging species to play, Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: They hiss there words due to the difference in body and facial structure, As well as there tongues that can grow a substantial amount of length The Unathi code of honor has them frown on ranged weapons, with many Unathi preferring melee combat, The Clan and Fuedel system makes it an interesting thing to roleplay out. Character Name: Azeir Ssinzar Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs Azeir Ssinzar was hatched into the Moghean Culture in the untouched lands he was born with a quite rare skin color, He was a White Unathi, People called him a side effect from The Contact War said he was useless a good for nothing a defect, Some even tried to kill him, His Mother and Father were red, Nobody knew why their son was white, They didn't much care, His father was working for a company called Nanotransen and was stationed on the NSS Aurora and his mother was staying in the Untouched lands to watch over him, When he turned five years old he was sent to learn the ways of the clan, at that point his mother and father started planning an arranged marriage for him when he reaches fifteen years of age, When Azeir was learning the ways of the clan he was also learning being educated on the status and state of the Izweski clan, At ten years of age he had completed his schooling and knew some ways of the Izweski, He continued pursuing knowledge on a security role for Nanotransen he wanted to do what his father was doing. Upon the age of fifteen he was set to marry Ssneir Chzis, They had known eachother for quite awhile she had been the one who comforted him when he was put down by his fellow Male Unathi, they had a deep bond of friendship, Until on the day that marriage was suppose to be on, Ssneir Chzis was brutally mutilated by a spearman from an enemy clan, When news reached Azeir he told his mother he would be going out for awhile, He was gone for one week. He returned to his small home in the Untouched Lands with a head, A sand colored head, It was the head of the spearman who murdered his betrothed his white scales spattered with red, His mother ran and told the Clan Leader S’kresti Izwesk and instead of punishing like the mother had thought, He encouraged it, So Azeir was brought to S’kresti Izwesk and recruited to be a warrior for the Izweski Clan, Upon reaching the age of twenty Azeir had fought many battles his build tall and muscular, his voice deep and authoritative, until his father had come home to visit him, Azeir returned to his small home were he greeted his father and his mother, His father was called back home by his mother to tell Azeir that he should stop fighting and think about applying for a security cadet role at Nanotransen's Station NSS Aurora, Azeir was getting tired of fighting and so Azeir, His mother and his father, Begged the clan leader S'kresti Izwesk to relinquish the duty of clan warrior from Azeir, Though S'kresti Izwesk did not like one of his best going, He allowed it for the many years of service he had given, Today he left for nanotransen. Azeir went with his father and mother to Nanotransens Command Station NSS Odin were he applied to be a security cadet, With a little note of reccomendation from his father who was Wardening at NSS Aurora Azeir was placed as a Security Cadet on the station, He worked as a Security Cadet for three years until he was promoted to Security Officer, his father was so proud of him, There was a biohazard outbreak closing the station for two weeks, During the leave his father and mother had decided to return back to there home world of Moghes leaving the warden position open on the station, Azeir spoke with the Head of Security and got himself transferred to Warden. When the time of two weeks was up, He sent a message to his parents telling them that he had gotten a position as Warden, So he walked into Work that day fresh off the shuttle with his new uniform, Ready to work. What do you like about this character?: His determination as well as his personality. How would you rate your role-playing ability?9/10 Notes:
  24. +1 Quinn Lindsay is a great character to roleplay with, Helpful Friendly, Deserves a head roll.
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