Character Feedback: Khas'miera Al-Rahan

[Seeli]

Hey there,
I would like some feedback on my M'sai, cargo technician, and mother of two, Khas'miera Al-Rahan. Tell me what you like or don't like, so I can improve her.

Edited December 3, 2019 by Seeli
Meant to add character feedback to title. Fixed.

[Natiform]

i think khas’miera has been a WONDERFUL addition to cargo. as a QM main, it’s always pleasant when i have someone around that i know will actually get shit done without any active babysitting ^^’

 

as for her character, i think we may have spoken briefly on this before, but i’m happy to say it again: khas’miera is absolutely adorable and i would die for her. 

 

jokes aside, i really appreciate the depth and care you put into her character. i’ll admit i’m slightly biased from reading your taj app about her, but it makes all of her little quirks that you very consistently play out make a lot more sense. the cutest quirk that instantly comes to mind when thinking about her is that she’s always collecting cardboard for her kitten to build and play with. it’s just a tiny little detail that i really appreciate on top of everything else. 

 

your rp with her is fantastic, and i appreciate your ability to roll with the punches (as you unfortunately have to do with her a lot- damn carp) but it just adds to an already very fleshed out character. her fear rp is top tier and VERY understandable, and you know the limits on to when to make the fear rp comical and when it calls for being much more serious- which, again, is fantastic as some people are always either one or the other. 

 

overall i i don’t really think i have anything negative to say on her- it is a bit difficult to rp with her at times as a non-tajaran (but that’s just because you can get left out of conversations that you don’t understand, which can happen to anyone and is in no way a bad thing- you’re allowed to have private conversations!) and i know part of that is also just because she is a bit more reserved than most. which, again, makes sense when you know her backstory a bit more. 

 

just keep doin what you’re doin. i love khas ?

[Bear]

An amazing character that has developed alongside mine. Granted, I am quite biased to Khas'miera, but I adore her. She's a taj who understands actions have consequences and rolls with them, it has been fun to watch her learn and develope as time has gone on. Hands down one of my favourites as you already know. Keep being awesome.

[Cnaym]

Awesome character that get's trapped with the not so awesome cargo teams to often. Get some tasks outside the department, it helps a lot for the character and your mental well being as a player ^^ getting stuck somewhere else during a code red is the best time to meet and greet all kinds of people. There is a reason why the bar almost never closes

That might be a problem with realism though. I tend to get my character to safety and behind multiple doors during crisis from time to time and it's not easy to find your way into a place you usually don't belong in. Best tipp for the access and outgoing work would be the classic bridge assistant, in the case of cargo getting tunnel access and maybe bridge access to deliver all kinds of things when people most need it. (though risky and not something for every character or player).

All in all I don't do tajara or motherly characters, but your version is my favourite right now