Boggle08's Unathi Lore Deputy App

[Boggle08]

Ckey/BYOND Username: Boggle08
Discord Name: GrandMasterChef
Position Being Applied For: Unathi Lore Deputy
Have you read the Lore Team Rules and Regulations wiki page: Yes
Past Experiences/Knowledge: I'm in education for an English major right now. Prior to this, I dedicated most of highschool specializing into computer science, but it didn't really work out. I did lead a few projects for a STEM club relating to programming. I can read code, and am in the slow process of figuring out github. I've always had a fixation on worldbuilding and fiction regardless; I have pages and pages or art and design documentation for ideas and concepts I've created in my spare time, but never actuated. Prior to the Aurora, I've had experience roleplaying on HRP Ark Survival Evolved servers, at least five. I've participated in table-top RPG's, but never GM'd.
Examples of Past Work:

I've contributed Burzsia 

I also have my Unathi, Dionae, and IPC whitelist applications, if you need more direct examples of my writing ability.

Additional Comments:

I have everything in a google doc. It's a three parter, discussing the structure of unathi lore and what I would like to achieve, Some miscellaneous ideas of what I might contribute in the future, and the writing exercise requested by the lore developer:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IYzdcyFBC0X1xJGk9M2nxEXfStoBJQR-FGWjPkHEnAQ/edit?usp=sharing

Edited December 26, 2020 by Boggle08

[Alberyk]

While pointing out the already known issues of the unathi lore and what you are doing to change them is a good start and something that everyone will likely do. I think that the stuff you wrote in the google document is really bland. You say you like world building and is interested in adding more fluff, but there is no example of this in the application. Even the arc itself is lacking any kind of plot outside of being a power struggle between two some factions, something that is very common in the lore. 

Writing any kind of page, addition, or even an article related to the unathi lore would help us in gauging your skills and understanding of the lore.

[Haydizzle]

Applicant has decided to retract their application. Thank you for taking the time to apply nonetheless!