[Denied] Dante's Vaurca Request

[DanteCrow]

BYOND Key: DanteCrow

Character Names: Teah Terana, Akex Xavier, Xanders Anders

Species you are applying to play: Vaurca

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Redish brown

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes

Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question

 

Why do you wish to play this specific race: They seem so unique compared to the other races. They have the option to act how ever you want your character to act, if it's unbound at least. Their backstory is also quiet amazing. The idea of their cast system is something that peaks my interest and overall. The character just seems fun.

 

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: First off their system of speaking, as well as their personalities. A human is...well a human. They act how a human would, some a less than respectable. Vaurca on the other hand. They don't have a middle ground. Either respectable and kind (Unless it's towards an enemy hive.), or a complete prick because they were torn away from VR.

 

Character Name: Ka'Akaix'Xieve'Vessex

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

Humans...Human law study...human emotion...Human fighting, fighting...human fight techniques. Yes...interesting. Ummm...Reality, history of humanity...So much...hmmm...Reality, history on human law...What does...humane mean? Reality, define human word, humane...I see, reality human weapons, and tools used for law and order. Taser, guns, hand...cuffs..Yes...I see. Reality, playback human media. Law and order in action....(several hours go by)...reality...display human biology chart...Humans are so...fascinating...Oh! Reality, human book of law and order...(days go by as Ka'Akaix'Xeive'Vessex reads the entire law book front to back) Reality...playback media, human breaking law. (several hours go into watching multiple playbacks) Okay. Reality, playback human media, human arrests criminal. (several hours go into watching yet again) I see!...Reality, virtual world. (Ka'Akaix'Xieve'Vessexe gains all the tools needed for a police officer as the world around him changes to that of a human city.) Reality, insert criminal. (Ka'akaix'Xieve'Vessex proceeds to arrest criminal. He spends several days repeating several difference scenarios)...Reality, please release me. I wish to...leave the virtual world. (everything fades to black, moments later he awake in the real world for the first time.) I wish to...work for humans...I wish to...enforce law...

 

What do you like about this character? He has a very action oriented attitude, with aggression that varies depending on what it is. Any other hive member he absolutely cannot stand, though if a human were to appeal to him he would probably calm down. He loves humans, like most of his hive, and as long as they don't do anything to him he will continue to do so. He is a type BA Vaurca, so he is kind of bulky. He stands at about 8 and a half ft tall, and is insanely smart, with a very curios mind, and a headstrong attitude.

 

How would you rate your role-playing ability?I'd rate myself 8 out of 10 flying pasta deities.

Notes: Ka'Akaix'Xieve'Vessex is a type BA Vaurca, that is unbound. He stands at about 8.5 ft, and has a redish brown color to his chitin. Normally complacent, but he must be watch around other Vaurca. If they're not from Vessex he has a tendency to...go off. Humans can normally keep him in check for some reason. He tends to favor them quiet a lot.

Edited August 25, 2023 by Desven

[Roostercat]

gonna be real chief that backstory says like nothing about your character

[KingOfThePing]

There is no "Vessex" hive in our lore

[Desven]

This application is denied. Please read the updated Vaurca lore. You may reapply in a week.