[Denied] Simfantic- Dionaea Whitelist Application

[simfantic]

BYOND Key: Simfantic

Character Names: Spencer Hendricks, M.A.I

Species you are applying to play: Dionae

What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):n/a

Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes

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Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question

Why do you wish to play this specific race:

As I believe it can inrich my current roleplay, with a species like dionaea it often strikes as wise, intelligent species which I hope I am able to roleplay as. I have become diona nymphs often through observing or being a ghost and I have gained knowledge on how they should behave and what roles they normally choose. I hope to spread good roleplay with this species.

Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human:

These species shows to be intelligeble and its lifespan is far greater than that of a human. Alothough it's speed will not always trump humans, it mind can. They heal from items that harm humans such as heat and radiation. They also do not require items to go eva except perhaps light to sustain themselves

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Character Name:Distant Memories of Starsong

Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs

Grown by the gardener, Cassy Hendricks, they provided other species like me to gain and grow biomass, every shift she would produce a melody of sweetness in order for my intelligence to grow as she though. She is my Mother Being.

I had grown and was unaware of the differences of the world, a world of iron and crystilaysed sand. It frightens me, but in order to beat this phobia, I must conquer the station in health. I was notified of a medical guild, I requested to join it and they accepted me quickly. Today, I shall go forth and heal organically, by using mind and soul.

What do you like about this character?

Its a new spin on things and I hope this can enable me to have much more fun with the server as well as make it a good party for those around me. I will try to perform to the best of my abilities to this race and I hope you accept me.

How would you rate your role-playing ability? A think it is good, I have been improving since I joined the server 3 or 4 weeks ago. It has greatly improved since last I roleplayed, In all honesty, I believe my role-playing ability is a 7/10, room to improve for the better I hope.

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Notes:

[tbear13]

-1 from me. I haven't seen much of you ingame, but you seem to be decent at least. The backstory is nothing, "i live now i'm a doctor" isn't a backstory. It seems like the character is just meant for you and Cassy Hendricks, and RP with everyone else is secondary. The rest of the application is average at best, the usual stuff. Until the backstory gets fixed, I can't support this application.

[LordBalkara]

Going to have to give it a -1 too. The concept of a "mother being" seems like a stretch for species that reproduces asexually and doesn't care for it's "young".

[Faris]

The application is both weak from a player and a character standpoint.

The application itself seems to have been done quickly with little thought or attention to lore. Frankly, you're rating yourself too high.

As for you as an applicant. You've had a lot of run ins with staff in a course of a month, you're on thin ice. A lot of these entries as based on your ability to roleplay within the confines of the rules.

Strong -1.

[MattAtlas]

This application is going to have to get a strong -1 from me.

Not only is your backstory very lacking, short, uneventful and does not show a character - but you're rating yourself far too high. Your roleplay has been subpar, and this has gotten you in trouble with staff many times.

[SleepyWolf]

After thinking on it for a while, I've decided to deny this application. Your actions on the server while you were logged on were not something that I'd want to see in a whitelistee, and the post itself lacks a few things - I can't tell what your dionaea would act like, and in terms of how they're different from humans, I'd like to see more in terms of societal differences instead of just mechanical differences.

You are free to re-apply after you improve your actions on the server to be that fitting of what we'd want to see in a whitelisted player, and flesh out your application.

Good luck next time!