Since the old forums have locked, I am re-posting this to continue the critique and improvements that the last one gave me.
This set has the new records to reflect the changes so far:
All right. I have been slowly clipping off bits if my Dynasty of water themed last name characters. Retirings coming up. New jobs not on station an the like. And now that I am getting down to my core characters that will remain. I thought I would get some criticisms in for any changes to make on the quiet. For that bitch in the blue coat. Eliza Pond.
And the facts were these:
Flavour Text:
She looks overworked. | Height: 175cm | She has a slender well toned upper body a small bust and narrow hips. Her face is angular with deep blue eyes.
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Backstory elements:
Background on her skills and why she has them:
Fears and dislikes:
Quirks and other stuff:
