Eve Posted April 28, 2018 Share Posted April 28, 2018 BYOND Key:AlFalah Character Names: Evangeline Du Dancion, E.V.E Species you are applying to play:Integrated Positronic Chasis What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: IPCs fit the futuristic theme of Aurora that I really enjoy, and their ability to rapidly learn, and their disability to fully understand human emotion and empathise make them a fun-to-play species in my opinion. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: As synthetics, they’re ruled by their pre-programmed utilion values, which is to mimic a non-synthetic’s sense of ethics and morality. As different numbers can be assigned to different utilion values, they have the ability to see the greater good, just like humans, lest they are programmed to. However, unlike non-synthetics, their utilion numbers cannot be changed due to occasion. Character Name: NT-R014198, Alice Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs In the year 2458, NanoTrasen experienced a noticeable decline in overall staff. Besides searching for additional employees, they also made the decision to emphasize the increased presence of synthetics in the workforce. However, not wanting to outsource more than they already do to Hephaestus who generally holds such a monopoly on the creation of synthetic frames, NanoTrasen began producing their own synthetics for use in the workplace. Thus started the development of an AI, in NanoTrasen’s relatively new Department of Robotics and Artificial Intelligence; since to them, an AI they’ve made would be much more efficient and trustworthy, as it’d be programmed with only NanoTrasen’s best interests held in mind. After the development had finished in the year of 2559, the department decided that it would be for the best that the personality was kept within a positronic brain, and was subjected to interaction with organics to best suit it for localized work. After a short amount of testing, intelligence NT-R014198 was confirmed to be fit for duty aboard NSS Aurora, bearing its own strengths and weaknesses. It could process and use data at a rapid pace, even by synthetic standards, allowing it to operate faster. The only flaw it had was its passive personality, where it’d usually prefer attending its own business, but it would accurately respond to verbal inputs, and answer them accordingly. Acquiring a Baseline frame from Hephaetus Industries for a moderate price, the positronic brain was placed inside, given the ‘nickname’ of Alice by the small team which developed it, for it to appear more approachable, and for ease of operations, to be shipped to NSS Aurora as a Scientist, mainly to attend RnD. What do you like about this character? Not completely understanding the concept of human emotion, it is rather entertaining to RP some level of miscommunication, as well as a synthetic’s struggles to scientifically learn the process of thought, to be able to understand them better. How would you rate your role-playing ability? 7/10 Notes: I appreciate any and all feedback! Link to comment
Maereo Posted April 28, 2018 Share Posted April 28, 2018 +1 from me I’ve seen nothing but amazing role play from Eva Link to comment
Bygonehero Posted April 29, 2018 Share Posted April 29, 2018 You've improved tremendously. +1 from me. I enjoy all interactions with both of your characters. Link to comment
AmoryBlaine Posted April 30, 2018 Share Posted April 30, 2018 Eve's good for it. Good RP, good player. +1 Link to comment
Bath Salts Addict Posted April 30, 2018 Share Posted April 30, 2018 I was promised ERP if I +1'd this. Alice is a joy to see as a pAI, and Eve already has the synthetic personality down to a T. And if it means getting them to play a character who doesn't have some form of "Eve" in the name, that's a bonus. +1 from me Link to comment
ToasterStrudel Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 Eve I believe you have improved yourself over the past moth or two. I've gotten to know you oocly and enjoy your company. I believe your RPing abilities are pretty good, maybe some room for improvement but everyone is a critique. I think the only thing I dislike about this app is it seems like a cop and paste from the other. Though that isn'the a major problem, as the story is fine, but I believe you could have maybe added some more details to it in the time between applications Overall, I do think you deserve a +1 Link to comment
LanceLynxx Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 I'll only +1 if your IPC proceeds to drag it's ass across my desk and make as much noise as physically possible all jokes aside, your synth gameplay is excellent, and I've seen you grow from the pAI all the way to borg and CE, your RP is excellent and mechanical knowledge is good as well. Coffee? +1 from me Link to comment
SRVODeath Posted May 1, 2018 Share Posted May 1, 2018 The reason I get migraines and cry at night. RP is on point, and the backstory of the IPC is unsurprising decent. +1 Link to comment
CakeIsOssim Posted May 4, 2018 Share Posted May 4, 2018 Indeed, you have improved quite a bit since your last application. Congratulations! Application accepted. Link to comment
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