Dragonspare

First and foremost, with the obligatory REEE: Now that we have that out of the way, the real review: There are several things that i like from this character. For starters, his parents, they're not horribly pushy or abusive - Ker'los just feels intimidated by their feats and wants to be at their level, maybe his parents don't really meant the whole intimidation in the first point. This whole "i have to make my parents proud" motivation is a bit weird, but accomplishes what it should, pushing a character always onwards to be a better worker/person. And it doesn't leaves the character stagnated in a spot, as he'll always strive to make his parents even more proud, at the same time exposing himself to these other intelligent lifeforms that he hasn't really interacted too much. Not a lot more to say. All and all, it's a backstory that fills enough about a character's information and leaves it open for the player to evolve this new character in any way they wish to. +1 from me! I trust that Ally can take this concept somewhere interesting enough for other players to interact with this new squid boy. Bonus track: Mistype

For one reason or another it has come to my notice that recently (for some reason) this has been missing from the form number 500: Revised form 303 attached [Y/N]: [field] Myself and some other players of Robotics have had a talk about it. And i don't know about the community or other players of that profession, but i'd like it to be added back. Served a purpose as a wall to check if the people that wanted a willing cyborgification was really right in the head, though most times it works as a way for new people who want to be borged out of boredom or some other reason. That and in our lore borgification is such an important action that things like psychological evaluations and so should be taken of the subject. The final form would look like this: [small] [center][b]NanoTrasen Inc. Civilian Branch of Operation[/b] Form 0500 Personal Release (Cyborgification)[/center] [hr]Facility: NSS Aurora Date: [date] Index: [field] This form entails the personal release of the undersigned employee of the NanoTrasen Civilian Branch of Operation for the process of repurposing the employee’s brain as a biological processor. The undersigned employee, through the act of signing this form, accepts to bear responsibility for any and all effects that the denoted surgical proceedings may entail. Employee: [field] Current Assignment: [field] Revised form 303 attached [Y/N]: [field] Signature: [field] Supervising Head of Staff’s Signature: [field] Assigned Personnel: [field] Research Director’s Signature: [field] Research Director/Captain's Stamp[/small] Note: I'm not sure if the original field that required a 303 form was worded exactly like that, but i got the closer i could out of memory. I know that it isn't certain if it ever was there or not by Alberyk's word on this, either way i'd like it to be there for the reasons stated above.

First things first, i always throughly enjoy rounds where i get to work with play with Lualyrr at robotics, though i haven't interacted too much with either Thuy or Lia, i can already assume from what i've seen that they're as deep and friendly characters, to an extent of course. Asides from OOC fuckery and other characters, this idea sounds dull in my opinion, but i know that Lua will do something that will turn it interesting to interact with. To add to all of this, we could really use some more officers with less attitude, this won't be a character that will have a lot of friends/relationships with the crew, quite the oposite rather, but reading about how interested is the player in sending their synthetic to robotics for checks (whenever the antag/graytide of the hour isn't killing someone) sounds like a plus for everyone, seeing how boring can both the security officer and roboticist roll get if the rounds goes slow, so they offer more oportunities to RP with without too much feelings (or feelings at all) still. All and all, i trust that Lualyrr will be capable of handling the whitelist accordly without a problem. +1 from me!

This was a rather long time coming one. To start off, i think Superior is one of the finest players we have here, he has been here as long as i was, or even a bit less, but he shows a rather mature personality to top it off, if there's someone from the people i know on Aurora that would be a good Moderator, that'd be him, both because i know his characters have some quality that i like, and that he's a friendly and approachable person OOC. I don't really have much to add, because there isn't, though i'll admit he can get salty to an extent if he has been done wrong in some way IC, but it always is short-lived and not even that much of a salt, more of a little mope. All and all, i think he has the capabilities to be a fine moderator, seeing how he upholds the rules as he plays, i'm confident he will do equally good when he enforces them.

After telling Superior "Yeah, i'm going to drop at your head app soon" around a dozen times in a few months, i'm finally here. Well, i'll do a little review of it, just because it feels shallow for me to not, so lets get right into this: You should be ashamed, this deserves a permaban and human whitelist strip. Now seriously, Superior is an excellent player and my recent interactions with him (mostly by his new scientist, Cathryn Latham) have shown that he's an excellent RPer too, something that i enjoy more than actually playing the game. I can't say i dislike any of Superior's chacters from an OOC perspective, we always need Tiltons on station (our resident dick bartender), Lawrenson and Latham are really interesting characters without falling into the unique category. All and all, good boy, would RP with again, 10/10. +1 PS: I didn't do a full-review because nothing of this was of my dislike/wrong in any sense.

Reporting Personnel: Jack Mitchell Rank of Reporting Personnel: Biomechanical Engineer/Bartender Game ID: bN2-cruH Personnel Involved: - Antony Kell, Station Engineer: Offender ((JFerguson, i think)) - Jack Mitchell, Bartender: Victim/Witness ((Dragonspare)) - Poslan Kur'yer-Isra, Security Cadet: Witness ((Jboy2000000)) - John Artell, Visitor: Witness ((Unknown Ckey)) Time of Incident: Several offenses through the whole shift, biggest one around the 1:20 hours mark, when i arrived to the NSS Exodus Real time: UTC: 12 AM - 2:15 PM ((Aprox time)) Location of Incident: Bar of the NSS Exodus Nature of Incident: []Workplace Hazard []Accident/Injury []Destruction of Property []Neglect of Duty [X]Harassment []Assault [X]Misconduct [X]Other Theft of station's property and temporal vandalism to more property Overview of the Incident: I arrived to the shift normally, first thing i do is to ban Antony Kell from the bar, as he has harassed me a number of shifts before this one, when i arrive to the bar i see him waiting near the counter, i recall telling them to go, when i get out of the backroom after changing clothes i see Kell with some tools near the Booze-o-mat and said machine sparkling wildly, during the shift, he begged and knocked on the window of the bar, asking him several times to leave, they only did when i called IS of the station, later that shift, an officer that isn't Poslan gives me a beer kegg, he said some engineer stole it, i propose Kell, seeing how he normally is a raging alcoholic and he could've done that because i rejected him from that Did you report it to a Head of Department or IAA? If so, who?: - Anabelle Sovno, Captain: She told me to cut it when i was adding the theft charge - Ikrad Yam'hir, Chief Engineer: I PDAed him, i am not totally sure if he was SSD or he decide to ignore it Actions taken: Security did brigged him when the tranfer was ready for the crew, but someone with said behavior -and i repeat he harassed me a number of other shifts- needs to be punished in some other way Additional notes: The behaviour of this engineer had myself and some others near to me tired of it, i repeat again, it was not once, but several offenses

Even if you fixed it, the character's attitude is still the one of a goof that does invasive and plain foolish stuff to enjoy himself (breaking a few regulations in the way) and it is not believable that he would work in a private research station for a megacorporation. I've been told that this is far from what a IR should be, an IR should be an incident/accident that happens once and they need a little dicipline, this is for characters that shouldn't work in the first place, example: our dear Ethan. And even if you know how much seriousness this may take, you don't show it, so it's the same as if you wouldn't know it.

My two cents, even if those are minor crimes, they're consistent, a private mega-corporation would hire a man-child that's more of a hazard than a capable worker, he would've been fired a lot ago, if someone makes an IR soon, he will, all of my interactions with Ethan have been displeasing and bland. The one i can remember completely is the time because he wanted to become a 'borg because "reasons" (the reason was that he felt that he cannot do his job in his body, he was a damn librarian/assistant or something along those lines) then i guess next round they retconned it, Ethan's player seems to think that their acts have no consequences on rounds that aren't the one that the crime was made. If this doesn't gets solved OOCly (that it shouldn't, because NT could've hired them just because he's a low-pay worker), then just make an IR, even if it takes some time, i assure he'll get fired. If his records haven't been edited to fit how "childish" he is, it would have to

So, i have never had experiences with you in game, but i like to go over Unathi whitelists, so here we go First off, i have to add, it's allways welcome to have more Unathi chaplains (i'm assuming he's a chaplain), as they're really important to the ones in security, who most times call themselves warriors, even if it's a totally inacurate term, the ones who truly follow Th'akh would appreciate someone to "bless their weapons" in general or before some planned battle. The backstory is rather simple, but there's nothing wrong with it, the uprising of Sk'akh is present in said backstory, that being the reason why Kesaos leaved Moghes. That's a great character concept, i do think some Unathi should cut the senseless agressiveness, but still, more non-agressive Unathi are greatly appreciated Reviving this dead app with a +1, good luck

Yes, more questions, i'll begin now .First, how backwards is the Kazata freehold (if backwards at all) in the technology outlook? .Do the Kazata freehold has the same security system as the Izweski hegemony? (guards, captains of the guard and so) do all goverments in Moghes do? (i recall some others being there) .Is the Kazata freehold an active threat to the Izweski hegemony? have they allready attacked it? .Back to the other questions, if there still are other goverments appart from the IH and the KF, are they behind in the technology race? .Did Unathi had any instruments? if so, please say a few .Seeing how Unathi have their own months system, do they count their years in Unathi years out of their system? in that topic, do they celebrate birthdays, or how i like to call them "hatchdays"? .Do they have any important holiday? (apart from the one in the news) .Is there a map of the different factions in Moghes? .Does Unathi belive that a proper burial is needed for the spirits to pass to the spirit world? even if they are at war and they have no time to bury bodies?

Well, to be blatantly honest, there's a lot wrong here, so i think it's time to get it together Well, i hope you take that to a low degree of reminding rules instead of trying to enforce them, because the latter is going to get you in problems with the server staff No reason specially? he just spended a lot of money in a cyber eye but he doesn't uses 90% of the time, that's wrong in my opinion, but it's a minor point As covered previously, this is a bad one, he apparently is 34 and can take "almost every prfession on the station"? training takes time, even more so with complex stuff like Xenobiology. This is solely my opinion, one of the biggest snowflakes of the server is a human, so i wouldn't say that every human character isn't unique and instead is totally generic. I have seen Ruddy in different roles several times, around science and so, he's so bland that i never could recall in what specific position he was -1 from me, might be changed with some serious editting to your application

BYOND Key: Dargonspur Character Names: The drunk biomechanical engineer and the sec lizzer (the one with muh honor) Species you are applying to play: Snk ppl What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Beige Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yup, great title Snek's name: Hissy sissy Snek's role: Chef What does your snek man do: A snek man as wide as a noodle, by his color and contexture, he had most of his tail munched out of him by a patron that thought that he was a non-danger noodle

The statistics of the knife aren't important, more like the fact of bringing a knife to your workplace only because flavor, it shouldn't be really allowed by NT, not even for security personel, even if it's handy for sometimes

Now, some time ago, i've started to have some doubts and questions regarding cybernetic limbs (seeing as that one of my characters main Biomechanical Engineering, and he needs to be an expert about it), here are some of them: .Well, first off, can cybernetic limbs feel (tact, when touching something)? if not, there are expensive implants that could make so possible? .Allthrough i had roleplayed that said limbs need weekly maintenance, is it true? or is it a longer/shorter span? .It has come to me that several people use cybernetics limb as a reason to say "I'm stronger than you", i do get the point, but are said limbs stronger? i'll admit, if it's one made of metal, of course the impact will do more damage than an organic one, but the point i wanted to reach is, if they are stronger/faster than the original arm .A follow-up from last question, are cybernetic arms just like the previous arm (talking about a stock model)? and, i suppose they can be if you get someone to make a custom one for your necesities .Can said limbs be implanted to have extra strenght/speed/random buff? i see several people claiming so .Another trope i've seen several times is the "hit it, i can't fell pain here", this is a mix-up of a lore canonization request and a question, as i would expect, to link the limbs with your brain, you have to make cables go through the stump/injury, when someone gets hit strong enough (dent), internal circuits and sensitive wires go off, causing pain to the stump by the wires sparks making contact to the skin (assumed so because the "health-bar" does determine one's pain and how they can hold up in front of it)

I support this, flashbangs ten to solve situations too easily, i have sinned in that regard myself once, i consider flashbangs as a piece of MAJOR equipment, it being too dangerous, seeing how much damage you can do when the others are flashed