sebkillerDK

Alright, first of, where have you been? i haven't seen you around in forever, but i've missed Cheshire. second off, the app seems decent, and i only have one issue with it. The backstory seems a Little bit meh regarding the malf AI part. but i've seen worse levels of snowflake. i like how he went from security to Medical, after having observed different expiriences. Overall, i've had very good and interesting roleplay with cheshire. a particular case i remember, being a round, where cheshire got stuck in a rad storm. and went a Little crazy. however in a good way, and it was RP'ed well. my final jugdement. you have my support. i've had allmost nothing but good RP from your ide, not much OOC behavior to jugde off, but that matters Little, compared to the IC behavior i've seen from you. +1

Well, overall, the app is very well written, i get the genneral feeling that you know what your talking about, and have the capacity to become a head of staff. I've only interacted with your QM, and that was regarding some rather Hostile crates in the warehouse. OOC wise, you seem like a nice person. i'll try and get more RP with your chars if i can. jugding from the app, and my OOC encounters with you, i will support this. +1

Thanks for the feedback Mofo, i will try to addes your points as good as i can. and i really like the suggested idea you wrote about Samiya not wanting to deal with the corruption or the mafias, i find that to be a good reason to leave the PRA police force and join up with NT.

Alright, first of, i have played and interacted with a few of your characters, and allmost all of the time, it has been a good and interesting interaction, showing both the ability to be funny, while at the same time keeping it at a good level of roleplaying. Now, a few Things. 1: The backstory seems a Little confusing to me, and Dosen't really tell me much about how your IPC is, Exept that i's Canadian. besides that it was created to serve an old dying man WHO abused it alot, and that it would allways apologise for everything. Maybe expand it a bit? 2: I like the idea of an IPC with the serve without question theme in it, havent seen that alot. Besides from the few Things listed above. i like the app and the idea overall, so it's a +1 from me.

Hmmm. Now that i think about it, i have no definitive answer to defend that statement, so i'll change that. She came into contact with NanoTrasen while looking around for a new job, and since NT were quite fond of taking in Tajarans as a cheap workforce, she managed to land a contract after a few interveiws and the mandetory background checks. As for why she was discharged? Accidents happen sometimes, and she had at one point accidently shot and wounded a Fellow officer during a raid, followed by a few other mishaps, which lead to her in the end being deemed not worthy of serving the PRA. ((the raid part will become apperant in records when i get them done.)) Yes she was, and it was in one of these raids where she accidently shot and wounded a Fellow officer.

BYOND Key: sebkillerDK Character Names: Jack walker. William wakefield. MX-42 (Android). Kaizen (AI). Species you are applying to play: Tajaran. What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Silver. Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes, several times, and i love it. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I want to try and improove my roleplaying, by trying to play something else than human, and with different culture and mindsets. I love the Tajaran lore and find it interesting and with great oppertunity for good and varying RP. I find it interesting regarding their period of time compared to the human, with the home planet having a long history of noble rule and revolutionary wars for rights and rule. I also think that the fact that there are different sub-species of tajara all with different traits and manners make way for plenty of ways to interact with crew and other players in a large manner of ways, especially with other Tajarans who might be of opposing beliefs or maybe the same, allowing for more indepth roleplaying. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: First of all, Tajarans have different physioligy from humans and other species. They can't wear normal footwear or gloves and have to wear specialised or modifyed clothing to be able to fit their physioligy. For example hardsuits, who have to be specially refitted for a tajaran to wear one, which sometimes can create problems if the equipment needed to do so is not presen or available. Also the Tajaran sleep cycle varies greatly from other species, in that they tend to stay awake for long periods of time and then sleep for long periods aswell, having small powernaps in between the wake hourhs to keep them refreshed and active, thus sometimes forcing them to take a small break and relax somewhere until the next job comes up or they are required to do something else. Tajaran social behavior also differs alot when compared to humans, where humans tend to stand more united as a species in the whole, Tajarans have allways been divided by class in society and sub-species, thus tend to be less united than humans. Especially with the prolonged civil wars on their home planet, which has caused great suffering and hate between the different classes in society, and between the different species. Character Name: Samiya Radka Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs Samiya was born in a family of law enforcers, with a deep bond of police and law enforcement work being the primary occupation choice of the family. When the civil war started, Samiya and her Family was at first conflicted as to which side to support, some wanted to support the nobles, hoping to rettain their slightly elevated rights, while others wanted to support the PRA, as they believed that they had the best of the Tajaran as a species in mind, Samiya herself showed sympathy for the PRA, but did not do much in form of active resistence, due to her still not being meture enough to participate. When the dominance of the PRA became evident, and it was officially recognised as a legitimate goverment by other races, the entirety of the family decided to support them, signing up for police and law enforcement. When Samiya became mature enough to begin making her own decisions, she decided to follow the family tradition, and become a law enforcement officer for the PRA, she signed up and was eventually accepted into the force maintaining law and order for the PRA. Because no matter who's in charge, there are still and will allways be criminals to catch and deal with, such things have never changed nor will it ever. At first, Things seemed fine, and she went from day to day, doing her job. But over time, she began noticing the corruption around her, even within the law department itself. She found the corruption to be very wrong, and against the basic principles of police Work, She also had rather big issues with the goverment, Funding mafias and supporting them, using them to bolster order throughout intimidation. When she at one point got enough, and adressed the problem to her supiriors, she was just simply shrugged off and told to go back to Work. This made Samiya furius, and she resigned the same day. Following that, she went on without a job for some time. Until she was offered to work for NanoTrasen as a security member, based on her time spent serving the PRA, helping to maintain law and order. Samiya, who was without work and anny notable source of income, accepted the offer, and agrred to work for NanoTrasen as security personel. What do you like about this character? I really like the idea of a character, who works for the greater god of the people around her, and to protect them aswell, spending all of her time trying to improve the situation by helping where she was most needed, and protecting those who needed it most. Also the fact that she highly dislikes corruption, and dosen't really approve of backend under the table deals. I also like her kindnes towards others, allways trying to do her best, while at the same time remaining professional in regards to her work, and other people, requireing actual interaction to get to know her. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate my roleplaying ability to be at a decently moderate level, to put it on a scale, i would rate myself to be a 6 maybe 7 on a scale of 0 to 10. Notes: I apologise for anny eventual grammar or vocabulary mistakes or errors that i might have made, since English is not my native language.

Sorry for taking so long to make the changes you Guys suggested in the feedback. but here it is. with re-written parts and reformulated answers.

I have had nothing but good expirienes with Xenos and Epsilon. i love Epsilons personality and how he reacts to everything. most recent example being a malf round where we ended up together with no Laws. deffitnate +1 from me

same here? Edgar Dawnguard is your Scientist? not a new character?

I would definatly reccomend you for a Head position. ive had some really great RP with your characters and you seem to know what your doing. +1 from me

Fair point. i can see what you mean. ill need to reprhase it. i thought that i had read somehwere that it was sol 4. thanks for telling me the correct thing. ill try better to make sure what im typing is correct. . i will agree with you. that i really need to redo Jacks backstory. alot of it dosent make sense currently or is genneraly just bad. i will most likely redo him afther this. if the app fails. Thanks for the feedback. i really appreciate it. ill try my best to improove Jack in the future.

BYOND key: SebkillerDK Character names: Jack Walker. William Wakefield. MX-42, (Android). Kaizen, (AI). How long have you been playing on Aurora?: For a Little over half a year now, since summer 2016 Why do you wish to be on the whitelist?: I want to try something new, and be able to man a position, where i can have a chance of further improoving RP for both myself, and others in the round. Why did you come to Aurora?: My friend reccomended this server to me, as a good HRP server. Have you read the BS12 wiki on the head roles you plan on playing?: Yes i have read the BS12 wiki regarding my desired head role. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph each. Give a definition of what you think roleplay is, and should be about: Roleplay is about acting as a specific character, or role in a greater game of acting with others, having fun, and developing characters and a good story. It's about having fun, and enjoying your time spent together with the other players. Roleplay should be about, as i mentioned above, having fun and developing a good story, but at the same time keeping it at a realistic level of realism. What do you think the OOC purpose of a Head of Staff is, ingame?: I think that the OOC purpose of a head of staff player, should be to act as a sort of example, of how to roleplay properly in their respective departments, and help others that might have questions, about how to do specific tasks, or might be new to the game itself. What do you think the OOC responsibilities of Whitelisted players are to other players, and how would you strive to uphold them?: The OOC responsebility of a whitelisted player, should allways be to act as an example of good RP, and friendly helpfull behvior. Personally i will allways try to help the best i can, if asked for help. or answer questions asked about different Things in OOC, fx someone asking how to set up the SM. And gennerally being helpfull overall. Please pick one of your characters for this section, and provide well articulated responses to the following questions. Character name: Jack Walker Character age: 45 Please provide a short biography of this character (approx 2 paragraphs): Jack Walker was born on planet Earth in England. Jack grew up in a small town in northeren England with his parrents. During his childhood, Jack allways had a healthy interest for learning, and began doing such at a Young age, often spending time reading through the library books. Jack had a rather calm childhood until he reached the age of 16. Where his parrents decided to take him on a trip into Space. However, during the shuttleride into orbit, something happened and the shuttle hull was breached. His Moth, sitting NeXT to the shuttle window, was sucked out into the empty void of Space, her body never to be recovered. Jack survived due to his fathers quick thinking, he managed to get Jack an Oxygen tank and mask, and Thus saving his life. Following the accident, Jack returned to Earth after being determined healthy and discharged from hostipal. He finnished his primary school, and decided that he wanted to study medicine and become a Medical Doctor. He then comitted meany years to studying to become a fully flegded Medical doct and Surgeon, with an aditional degree in viroligy. after finnishing his studies and education, he went on a vacation visiting different countries on Earth, before he eventally Applied for a job at NanoTreasen, where he got accepted to Work as a Medical doctor, based on his broad skillset obtained through his long education period, What do you like about this character?: He is an overall Calm person, with the ability to keep his cool in stresfull situations, and act accordingly. nad gennerally friendly towards his collegues. What do you dislike about this character?: He does have a tendency to sometimes put himself in harms way to save others. What do you think makes this character fit to be a head of staff?: His broad Medical skillset from his long educaton period. his ability to keep calm in stressing situations, his overall friendly way of being, and his dedication to Medical practice. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions. How would you rate your own roleplaying?: I would rate my own roleplaying at about 8 out of 10. i have been trying alot harder lately to interct with others and get some RP going. Extra notes: I apologise for my grammar as English is not my first language.