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you sure about that

Right. Haven't interacted with your character and your ambiguity here didn't help clarify your desires. Good luck.

I know it's not always easy to take suggestions on your work. I think you opened yourself up to receiving the criticism and opinions of the community when you created this thread and I don't feel like anyone is discouraging you or being unappreciative of your efforts.

Whitelisting would allow a Lore Dev to enforce their accurate behavior and would inspire other's to learn their mannerisms thereby seeing more people attempt creating them. Even if only for antag and merchant roles, the clash of this species played by quality members with the Aurora would lead to some interesting rounds. +1

Ship manifests typically list valuable cargo, crew, and passengers, synthetics certainly fall into this category. I support this change. +1

How do you describe yourself when you introduce yourself? When you think of yourself introspectively? What's some characteristics you wish a first date would see? What's a secret you hope a life long partner will never find out? Use some writing prompts like this to build up your character. They are more than just food preferences and an educational resume. What makes them tick?

I still submit from earlier discussions on the lore channel that the background lacks a bit cohesion in my humble opinion. I know that you disagree but it seems too disconnected to have this sequence of events occur: Have a bargain bin colony management API oversee a clan of Wiccans suddenly be sold and transferred into a Xion frame for dumb labor. Despite your character aptly doing so prior, rejecting the urge to retain any conflicting religious or cultural influence from its stint as a slave amongst multiple other positronic brains during the only other half of their known existence. Divine that crypto-currency is its key to freedom and simultaneously write crypto-currency into the lore. Attain said freedom aboard the Aurora as a Wiccan shamanic Warden or Counselor. This further confounds me when factoring in your plan to ask for this character to be whitelisted as a head of personnel if this is approved. I have little to no experience in these kind of approvals so please take my laymen's perspective with a grain of salt. I mean no offense with my critique. Moving forward, while some of those bulleted points are perfectly acceptable on their own, juxtaposed with one another it seems a wildly absurd rise to prominence for an inferior piece of colony management software with a loosely justified gimmick. While I wish there was a bit more refinement, you have certainly successfully made a quirky and unusual pitch and I believe you possess the ability to breathe legitimatecy and life into your character. Edit: It's useless to offer a critique without suggestions or coaching. After some thought they are as follows: Perhaps your positronic what with it's affinity for colony management, created far more efficient ways of operation within the labour camp it was sold into. Perhaps the unit sparked a revolt? If your particularly proud of the crypto-currency route and that gets approval as a hand-wavium thing any IPC can do to buy their freedom, then perhaps the unit organized the entire inventory of posibrains in the labour camp and demonstrated to their owners the lucrative nature of said economy, earning it news coverage and notoreity thereby justifying it's celebrity and parallel rise to a free counselor's position. Perhaps there are certain tenants of Wicca that inspired the problem solving the IPC applied to reach this solution and gain it's freedom to justify it's fealty toward the faith. These are just some small tweaks to inspire your idea. Thank you for your attention and consideration.