Hi, thanks for your application.
The issue with the backstory is that it doesn't really say much about the character. What is their job? Who are these owners and why do they constantly keep wiping them? Purchasing freedom takes years for an IPC so them getting memory wiped immediately seems a bit odd, and while possible, this narrative theme doesn't really allow for you to show how the character grew or anything more meaningful when it comes to life experiences.
Now to the other questions.
I just want to mention that this is false, unless you meant the owner assaulting them. IPC are very expensive pieces of equipment and damaging one is like destroying someone's expensive car, so it's a bit of an important deal.
This is also not true in the game, you need to do something very bad like murder, mutiny or corporate espionage
In general, we'd like these answers to be more specific on some core elements of the species, like self preservation, datapacks, etc. that show some more understanding of the lore. I suggest reapplying with all this in mind, and with a new, more "conventional" background through which you can more easily portray a character, some core information on them, and how they evolved in a human dominated space up to how they finally reached the Horizon.
But for now, I'll have to deny this application.