The lancer

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Hello all, The synthetic lore team is now looking for a new person to join us as second deputy. We are looking for someone who is: Passionate for synthetic lore, willing to contribute in lore content, articles, events and everything else. Active, with adequate time on their hands that will allow them to contribute and see projects through. Able to work in a team, where disagreements are bound to arise in the creative process. To apply, create a new thread by using the following standard format: In addition to the above, please provide answers to the following: What aspect of synthetic lore are you most interested in and would like to work on? What do you think needs improvement in synthetic lore? How do you think IPC players should interact with factions unfriendly or hostile to them? Present a written work about anything related to synthetic lore so we can see your writing style, around 500 words minimum. It can be anything, from your own headcanon to a news article.

Even with the answers, they are too short. The character doesn't have enough depth I'm afraid, and it feels more like a ticked checkbox than a backstory. Come back with a better, more developed concept. You can reapply in 3 days.

Thanks for applying, but the character background is too short and needs some expansion. What did Alpha do when they weren't working, for example? Did people only discriminate against Alpha because of the slang? What is the story behind them transferring between the two jobs? Did they live in Biesel at all?

Hi, thanks for applying. The character background is too barebones for this to be accepted, and doesn't meet the 2 paragraph requirement. I would recommend you read some of the other applications to get an idea of the character depth we'd like to see in IPC applications. I would also tell you to read up on the Positronic Brain and the mechanical aspects of how IPCs function in the lore, because you do not mention them here at all. You can reapply in 3 days.

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Hello, thanks for applying. The app and story are good, though I wonder if you could expand a bit on what specific personal experiences Hazel would have to make her adopt such a grim outlook.

Thanks for reapplying, but this background is too extraordinary to be allowed. You can reapply in a week with a more grounded character.

Hi, thanks for applying. However I'll have to deny this application. You're very close but I'd like a more consistent background, based on the questions you answered here. Take some time to refine and put everything together in a new application, with a more extensive background. Also make sure to include information about the positronic brain, and how IPC learning works. You can reapply in 3 days.

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Hi, thanks for applying but I'll have to deny the application. For starters the backstory should be 2 paragraphs long minimum, and contain actual character content with how they are affected, how events shaped them, what views they have, etc. I suggest looking at accepted applications to get an idea of what we're looking for. I would also recommend reading the wiki again, because there's more mechanical differences from playing a human than just having less rights. I suggest taking a look at the Positronic Brain page. Lastly, it's the Trinary Perfection, not the Holy Trinity.

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Hi, thanks for applying and I'm really sorry for the wait, it flew under the radar and we've been a bit busy lately. I'd suggest having Havoc be made before its assignment on the Horizon in order to have some life experience for the application background. We like to see characters, but this delves too much into the technicalities of an IPC line. How is Havoc treated by their peers and other people? Have there been any experiences that shaped the way they think?

Trinary Emissaries Arrive on Xanu Prime Argia Sa Mar, Xanu Prime In a visit long anticipated by the Trinary Church on Orepit, a ten-person delegation has arrived in the Coalition capital of Xanu Prime. The touchdown at Argia Sa Mar was certainly a spectacle for the city’s small Trinarist community, as well as the decently sized crowd that came to observe the unusual visit. Since the synthetic-ruled Trinary Perfection planet is not an officially recognised nation, there was minimal official representation on behalf of Xanu’s government, who elected to meet them during the talks themselves. The delegation made its way to the privately hired motorcade, before being driven off with a modest police escort to their hotel. Their stay lasted for a total of five days, during which the Ecclesiarch’s diplomats conversed with a number of functionaries from the Xanu Free League as well as the Coalition of Colonies, in hopes of achieving a breakthrough in relations between the synthetic state and its neighbors. A notable addition to the Trinarist dignitaries was the presence of an Orepit original settler, an archivist identified only as “Filia”, with speculations about her inclusion widely agreeing towards the promotion of an image of reconciliation and integration of the settlers into the Trinarist society. No interviews or statements were given by the Providence emissaries, who upon completion of all necessary talks departed for home. Xanusii governmental sources speak of a wide list of objectives the delegation had to accomplish, chief amongst them being the normalization of the status of Orepit to whichever degree possible, and the recognition of its peoples’ right to interact with the international community without hindrance. Most importantly, talks were focused on allowing Trinarists to seek education, training and employment abroad, through a potential special program between Providence and the Xanu Free League. Details have yet to be published, and it is unknown what was requested of the Trinary Perfection in exchange.

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The problem is that if you want to make an Elyran IPC, they need to have some sort of Elyran background, which means working for an Elyran corporation. You have to tweak the backstory to reflect that and it will be accepted.

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Thank you for applying. It was very close, but we have ultimately chosen to go with the other applicant.