Character Feedback Thread

[Cassie]

Feedback on Elizabeth Hawthorne or Penny Islington?

[Jamini]

Hey, you all want feedback? Well here it is.

Medics:

Cliquey ass nerds

Science:

Super mega nerds leaching off the back of the good reds. The most dangerous people on the station.

Civilian:

Scum who must be stungloved and thrown out of an airlock.taught to be obedient with the end of the baton.

Command:

Obstacles in the way of justice, merely glorified door openers and retirees. The only sane people on the station

Engineering:

The orange will tear apart the glorious station's fabric. While others may know their place, they actively resist. You are worse than the filthy civilians, you are sub-human. The only people keeping y'all from a cold, airless death. Ya disrespectful punks

Security:

The glorious fighters and warriors of the station, defenders of justice. Responsible for maintaining the entire system, and charging at the Syndicate scum with our beautiful harmbatons and tasers. We are fearless, we are endless, we are anonymous. Glorified mall cops with a superiority complex that need to be put in their place constantly. Most should be permanently demoted to assistant.

 

Hackie Mhan:

As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death

I take a look at my life

And realize there's nothing left

'Cause I've been brassing and laughing so long

That even my momma thinks that my mind has gone

But I ain't never crossed a man that didn't deserve it

Me be treated like a punk, you know that's unheard of

You better watch how ya talking

And where ya walking

Or you and your homies might be lined in chalk

As his main character's name implies. Firewood: Something that needs to be burned.

 

Tajara:

Furry, rebellious space communists. Often the only people on the station actually WORKING, while the rest of you assholes go around killing each-other. They should be treated more lightly than Unathi and Balds but, should be treated worse than Skrell and Humans seeing as they're violent, most of the time, juvenile delinquents.

 

Humans:

The most common, boring, and disposable species on the station. They are like snowflakes with a 1033k combustion temperature! The master race, the most important. They should be treated justly and fairly. All should be treated worse than them.

 

Skrell:

Squid Badasses. It's a shame they are so rare. They have stupid accents and are better than us. They are filthy xeno scum who may be getting an advantage on our power. They also have stupid accents.

 

Unathi:

Big dumb brutes who are all like 'yeah m80 time to honour this shit up kek'. Ignore their excellent lore and just use them to kick some ass, I reccomend adding slave collars so they can be used as suicide bomber in a pinch.

 

Balds:

The epitome of all that is hated, they are the most dangerous of anything or one. Created in 1964 by several British scientists, the bald gene was designed to create the greatest supersoldiers possible. As they spread across the galaxy, their immortality allowed them to go on maddening killing sprees. You must beat them, weaken them. You can not let them break the line. If engineers security are bad, these guys are on a whole other level. Beat them with your glorious toolboxes. glorious baton. BEAAAAAT THEEEEEM.

 

Fixed it for you.

[Gallic]

Does anyone have anything to say about Vincent Arcirial?

I know he hasn't been around for a while, so I'll probably need to ask again later.

[God save the Queen!]

r8 Edmund Flashman-Adler, shitlord extraordinaire, pls.

[rrrrrr]

feedback on WALTER BROOKS, SECURITY EXTRAORDINAIRE

[Guest]

Rate Valery Compton, Best!Curity. :^)

[Guest Menown]

Edmund - Never interacted with. Everybody seems to love him though.

Walter Brooks - Too 'overriding' for my tastes. Disregards how the HoS does things and tries to force his own way.

Valery Compton - Defended my bald assistant. 10/10.

[Guest]

r8 Edmund Flashman-Adler, shitlord extraordinaire, pls.

He wrote the psuedo-adult novel about Robert Carver violating the sanctity of a Skrellian cadet. 10/10, made me cry with joy and laughter.

 

feedback on WALTER BROOKS, SECURITY EXTRAORDINAIRE

Haven't seen enough of them to make a verdict. Still seems pretty cool enough for an old-ish guy in security.

 

Rate Valery Compton, Best!Curity. :^)

We had a few chats earlier with myself as HoS. Was pretty interesting.

[Jakers457]

For those who've interacted with my newest character, Amon Eshka. Any opinions on them so far? Will repay with feedback of my own.

[Johnny Mnemonic]

Seeking further feedback and critique on Hosea Reeliah and my psych, Dorothy Sublett

Feedback on James Crimson welcome aswell

[Guest]

For those who've interacted with my newest character, Amon Eshka. Any opinions on them so far? Will repay with feedback of my own.

Very good geneticist, seems very professional, something science needs more of.

 

Seeking further feedback and critique on Hosea Reeliah and my psych, Dorothy Sublett

Feedback on James Crimson welcome aswell

James Crimson - An IAA with issues, very fun character, but slightly unfit for the role. But then again, IAA needs a fix.

Hosea Reeliah - Capable cadet, quite likeable, sorry, I don't pay attention to characters. You people are just numbers to me.

Dorothy Sublett - Station grandma, makes you want to protect her and say, "Yes, ma'am." all the time.

[Hackie]

Opinions on Mute? Because, surely a security officer who just follows anyone with a higher rank than him around, always silent is great! Right? Right.

[Carver]

Opinions on Mute? Because, surely a security officer who just follows anyone with a higher rank than him around, always silent is great! Right? Right.

10/10: Belts when asked to belt, and plays good music on demand. Couldn't ask for a better belting partner as Warden.

[Crescentise]

For those who've interacted with my newest character, Amon Eshka. Any opinions on them so far? Will repay with feedback of my own.

I've both observed and interacted with Eshka. I can't help but compare his mode of speech to Mass Effect's Mordin, and I don't know whether or not that's a good thing. He's competent, arpees genetic research (so rare hohmygod), and is a Skrell, so is overall cool in my book. You should prolly play him more, though, and shove your way into peoples' chair arpee (the struggle Skrell players face is that nobody wants to arpee with them for some reason, and everyone refers to them as 'The Skrell'). His whole turnabout-of-thought philosophy is something that could be super interesting if explored with someone's personal problems or what have you.

[Filthyfrankster]

Please yell at me about my special snowflake Zubari Akenzua the not so unathi unathi