Lonely Caravan

Alright, i'll get to work regarding the answers, and see what I can change in the backstory. Thank you for pointing everything out.

[mention]Loow[/mention], I added as much as I could, and tried to add as many characteristics as I could. This also goes to [mention]Jennalele[/mention].

[mention]Loow[/mention], Yeeah, I'll get to that. I'm not really good at doing that part of sending them to the Aurora. I'll try my best to improve that. Yeah, It's kind of hard for me to do this kind of thing, not because I am not sure how to, but I can't get much attention. Alright, i'll try to have it in mind from now on. I actually do, I even post more times than usual, It's just rare for me to actually get a reply without begging for it. Alright, I'll go ahead and work on the story a little, trying to make it more alive.

I interacted with butter a lot, and I think he's competent enough to handle a whole department. +1 from me.

Thank you, i'm trying my best to improve. I'll get to that, and try to make his personality as clear as possible.

BYOND Key:Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names:Kiluho Irusole, Delta MkII, Jackal MkIV, Koor Ezzioh, Putyatin Yermolayevich, Abyss, Bandit, Ka'Akaix'Vakk Zo'ra, Za'Akaix'Ku Zo'ra. Species you are applying to play:Skrell. What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):Blue. Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:I did. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I wish to try playing as a Skrell, not only because I got interested in their lore, but because they are so different than other races, emotionally-wise, and all that. I like the many personalities that I can create with so many differences. For example, I can create a skrell that dislikes synthetics, and that has their pride above almost everything, or I can create a Skrell that is neutral alongside synthetics, and thinks that they are bound to make big findings, and makes ceremonies after doing such. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: Well, almost everything. Skrell have been learning and exploring since the Year of Enlightenment, and are so advanced, compared to other species. And as I said before, I like how I can create many personalities from this lore. Character Name:Glonii-Kel Quool Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs What do you like about this character? I like that Glonii-Kel wants to help the skrell, due to the of the genophage. I also like him because he wishes to learn more about humans, and their really different way of thinking. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I'd say 6/10. Problems with powergaming, and validhunting, but I am trying my best to improve. Notes: If you see anything wrong with the grammar, or lore issues, please tell me. I am really sure that there is at least something that is wrong here, as it always happens. Also, IPCs are still superior.

I Always thought that the ninja gamemode always would concentrate their RP on one gamemode (most of the times, security), and if not, they would be PeaceRP, and people wouldn't find them very fun. If this gets changed, the ninja gamemode, in general, will be improved, I can imagine many and many cool gimmicks with these changes. I support this idea.

I have seen how well Kyres roleplays as a synthetic, and i'm sure he will be able to handle a synthetic. Plus, he helped with the synthetic lore itself, so I have no doubts that he is perfectly able to make good use of this whitelist. +1 from me.

I will try, i have seen in my last whitelist applications that sometimes i explain too little, it's because i am afraid of getting something wrong, and making it to be denied. I will get more details, though, thank you for pointing it out.

I will do that then, thank you very much for pointing it out. Yes, about that, it's because i have been busy to join lately, but i will be free soon.

"Hundreds of Tajara get hurt every day in the war, help us help them by sending money to the frontline hospitals." HelpPRASoldiers.com

BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names: Zaman Saufamasi, Dekel Zaydam, Jackal, Experiencers, Rasskal Ikeerzs, Sksuk Ikeerzs, Qadir Rramrare, Abdal Prruzhulkanich. Species you are applying to play: Vaurca What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): (RGB 41, 0, 0) Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: I did. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I'd like to play as a Vaurca because they have a very interesting backround, making them unique. I also want to play as a Vaurca because when I looked at their wiki page, I got very interested on this thing of the Higher Queens, the Lesser Queens, the Bound, the Unbound, and their characteristics. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: As i said before, not only their very unique way of thinking, and acting, but their Higher Queens, Lesser Queens, their types (Warrior, Worker, Breeder, and Cephalon) And this whole Bound and Unbound thing. Character Name:Za'Akaix'Vakk'Zo'ra Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs What do you like about this character? I like the fact that he didn't saw much of the reality, and that he will be surprised with a lot of stuff. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate from 7 to 8. Notes:

BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd Total Ban Length: Permanent Banning staff member's Key: Alberyk Reason of Ban: Arming himself as the janitor with guns and armor, and running into the engineering sublevel that was full of harmed hostiles, alone. Reason for Appeal: i have learned my lesson, and i noticed how annoying it is to simply rambo inside somewhere and attempt to kill an entire force of hostiles. I am really sorry for what i have done, and i will try my best to improve these kind of actions.

BYOND Key:Riqpley_Dagasd Total Ban Length: Eternity Banning staff member's Key: tainavaa Reason of Ban: Banned from pAI, AI, Cyborg - As a cyborg, went around shocking doors across the station; lying about it. Reason for Appeal: I was a griefer at the time, wich makes about two years ago. I've learned my lesson, and I stopped griefing a long time ago.

Seb showed a good knowledge of other races that he applied, and i believe that he will be a good RPer with this app. +1 from me.

I haven't seen much of Walker in action, but most of Seb's characters are very good to RP with, and i believe Seb would be a good Head of Staff, because he knows what he is doing, and i think he would help a lot more getting this application accepted. +1 from me.

The Sierra specifically would be an industrial shell, but the other two, would be baseline shells. The Experiencers can be completely configurable in the personality aspect. The Sierra that i will play will have some sarcasm, but not too much, compared to the other types of Experiencers.

Lets get some things done here. Thanks! I will manage to place more info in that aspect.

If you are new, be a greytider. Ahelp insulting the admins. If you are a xenobiologist, you NEED to die at the first 10 minutes.

BYOND Key:Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names:Fahjurl Nkharai, Robert Phillips, Izkhezash Ssha’Khus Species you are applying to play:IPC What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt):None. Have you read our lore section's page on this species?:Yes. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I want to play as an IPC because i was running about the aurora wiki, bored, and the IPC called my attention, due to its differences, not only by the mechanics, but about the lore, that is so adaptable to backstories, and not only that, but its differences of humans, the many possibilities of creating different ways of an IPC to be, so they could emulate emotions, but at the same time, another IPC, is completely expressionless, with a different way of being. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: As i said before, the IPCs have a variety of options that na IPC can be, you can compare two IPCs, one with a baseline, the most cheap version, with only basic and required components, such as Memory Storages, Power cells, etc, and on the other side, the shell, the most expensive, with everything included of best, Advanced Memory Storage, Emotion Emulator, Personality Emulator and such more things. Character Name:Experiencer-742-‘Sierra’ Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs . What do you like about this character? I like how the Experiencers can be configurable, and how the ‘Uniform’ type can learn to do things, so it could just learn on how to operate something. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate 7 to 8. Notes: I’m not good at english, please, if you see any errors on my application, state them on a reply, and i will fix them. ANY kind of errors, please. ALSO, the ‘Sierra’ type had NO connection with SierraKomodo.

Hello, i was Guwan on this round, and i wanted to say some things. First, i agree with Unknown Murderer on the part that Not Megatron dealt well with the situation, and all the points that he stated were true, we arrived, they asked us for a search, we didn't complied due to the gimmick (Community that didn't liked NT, and was looking for "member", that would be the RD, Kalla) and we moved on, doing as much as RP as possible while searching for Kalla. After we found her in science, she closed the blast doors, and when another scientist that was outside opened, she wasn't there anymore, so we got to the Xenoflora maintenance, where Taryk's team was in tactical gear, with lethals,she had an ion rifle in her hand, wich she used to aim at me. Now here's something that isn't true. I pull ANY kind of gear after she (Vira Taryk) shoots me, after the first shot, i pull my shield out, she keeps shooting me, when she pulls back to an corner, i get my SMG from inside my backpack, that wasn't open before, and shoot her, and all this starts the firefight. I really didn't saw a motive for the security team to act with such hostility. We didn't caused any harm, or even showed hostility, until that point.

Hey, Loow. Thanks by the reply, you helped me a lot showing me the errors that i commited on this application, and i did my best to fix them. I also agree with all your points.

BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names: Khazkrarheahk Sanu'dra(security officer)/Mrawaii'r Mrrodynh(Medical Doctor/Virologist)/Sanueechkirraj Kahjurl(Drill Tech/Cargo tech)/Kahketkirran Darkrawakra(Xenobotanist/Scientist) Species you are applying to play: Unathi What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Black Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes, and i loved it. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question: Why do you wish to play this specific race: I wish to play as an Unathi because one day, i was playing as a wizard and i mind-transferred with an Unathi, and noticed some things that neither humans or Tajarra have, like the strength and the ability of taking much more damage than a human. I wish to play as Unathi because they have an Unique form of emotional displays, Social Mannerisms, etc. I would love to RP as an Unathi because they have a very interesting backstory and a war that killed more than two billion Unathi, and is almost destroying their world, and that was very traumatizing to the Sinta. One thing i like on the Unathi is that their technology changed so fast, that if they were in a station like the Exodus, there could be something that they never heard of. Something i would like to do too is see, how would my character be welcomed at the Exodus, because i know an Unathi on the station that supports the Coalition, so i would like to see how he would welcome Izkhezash. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: As i stated before, there are lots of differences, they have different mechanics, they have a very different lore, The Unathi have very different Emotional Displays, comparing to a human and the Unathi have a very hard past and they are still suffering from it. Another difference is that their tech changed so much in only 3 years, so they don't know some tech from the humans yet, and i would like to RP like this. Character Name: Izkhezash Ssha'Khus Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs: What do you like about this character? I like Izkhezash because he passed through a lot of things, and i would like to see how would Izkhezash be received on the NSS Exodus. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate 8 to 10, in a scale to 10. Notes: I'm sorry by my horrible english, i am not north american, and sorry by any lore errors that i commited, but any comments are good for me, and i don't think this will get accepted, i am 50% certain that i will get denied, and, i need to see my errors, and feel free to say them. (i will not randomly challenge people to battles)

BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names: Robert Phillips (Detective/Security Officer) and Emmanuel Woodward(Medical Doctor/Paramedic/Xenobiologist) Species you are applying to play: Tajara What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Silver (RGB 192, 192, 192) Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: Yes. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: I want to try new races, every race has a different kind of roleplaying, and i have chosen the Tajara because he had a very difficult past and i want to roleplay with it, would be an very fun game, because act as a human is easy, now act as a Tajara is different you need to think as one. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: I would say that the tajara has some challenges that other races don't, because he has a very rich story, and as i said, you need to think as a Tajara, react like a Tajara (because you WILL be one). Character Name: K' Yad N' Kydra Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs K' Yad N' Kydra Is a Tajaran born in Dolor, on a planet called Adhomai. His father, H' Usha P' Khis, died before he was born. He had a difficult childhood without father, so he become aggressive. When he was 12, a group of the New Kingdom kidnapped both (his mother called Izza K'huda and K' yad) and killed his mother burning her in fornt of K' yad. He had an eternal trauma, so he moved to his Uncle house, J' igh P' Khis. with this, he wanted for revenge. Started working on a little workshop and heard rumors of some "NSS Exodus". He didn't care much, but heard too that his father, H' Usha, was killed by the same group that killed his mother. He knew one thing: they were going to kill him too. When he was 18, he joined the Army to fight the New Kingdom of Adhomai. When he was on Tunguska, going to atack Miran' Mir, he made a friend called Yasha I'husa. When he was assigned to be part of the Artillery with Yasha, he was very happy. When they were firing suppressive fire on the remaining forces of Miran, a sniper started to shoot on K' Yad. But he wasn't shooting to kill, he was shooting to keep him off the mortar. His allies started to fire against the sniper. Thirty minutes later, Yasha neutralized the sniper. When they were going to win, K' yad was shot in the arm by some troopers that were sent by the New Kingdom to neutralize the artillery. When K' Yad was retreating, he saw Yasha being shot in the head and falling on the snow. When he was 34, heard about the group that killed his family was in Barj' ar. With luck, he joined the Battalion that was going to attack that city. The colonew knew about K' Yad and have put him on the artillhery again. The People's Republic killed the whole army that was on the city, unfortunately, the reiforcements were heavily armed and they came with artillery too. The Republic tried to neutralize them, but their armors were too heavy. The artillery of the New kingdom shot against K' Yad's battalion and neutralized the majority of them. K' Yad survived, but with a large cut on his head and with the arm broken. He was attended by the medics of the Base camp and was released. With no family, no job, no home, he decided to join that "NSS Exodus". Today he's very happy with his job as Security Officer and will not let anything bad happen with the station. What do you like about this character? I like the courage of K' Yad and his ways of solving things and i like his maturity too. I like so much that he can not be moved so easily. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would rate 8 to 10. Notes: Im sorry by any gramatical errors or lore errors that i haven't seen.

BYOND Key: Riqpley_Dagasd Character Names: Robert Phillips(Viro/Security Officer) Species you are applying to play: Tajaran What color do you plan on making your first alien character (Dionaea & IPCs exempt): Dark Gray (RGB 30, 30, 30) Have you read our lore section's page on this species?: yes. Please provide well articulated answers to the following questions in a paragraph format. One paragraph minimum per question Why do you wish to play this specific race: because they have some very good skills (sees better in the dark than humans, has the extra damage when unharmed( i think this is good because i always die when an antag is fighting with me and with no weapons). I like the Tajarans too because they have their own "personality", i'm not saying that the humans and the other races haven't, but i like their anatomy, i like their personality, etc. Identify what makes role-playing this species different than role-playing a Human: first: they speak with some accent, second: they have very good skills, and third: they have some things that the humans havent, some languages, some different things that make the roleplay more fun. Character Name: Hur' Hash I'sughan Please provide a short backstory for this character, approximately 2 paragraphs Hur' Hash is a Tajaran from Ahdomai, on the Zhan-Khazan Group. He's very respectful with the people and likes to help. His Mother died by a virus when he was five years old. His father was a Virologist, but he gave up the work because of his wife's death, turning into an engineer. When Hur' Hash was 18 years old, he joined the army to, not only fight the war, but revenge his father that was assassinated by them when he refused to join them. When he was 26 years old, he was shot in the leg and was considered incapable of fighting, then he started to study medicine and became a Virologist when he was 32 years old. Months after, he was advised the existence of a great station called "NSS Exodus". With no family, he decided to join the space station to work as a Virologist. Today he's very happy with this job, working on a station on Tau Ceti of NT as a Virologist. He thinks that his mom would be very proud of him, just not because of what he has now, but what he passed through and didn't give up. What do you like about this character? I like the attitudes of Hur' Hash, something I like too on him is his bravery and his persistance, because he passed through a lot of bad things and he's very happy now. How would you rate your role-playing ability? I would give the note of 8/5 do 10. Notes: