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The time has finally come. I play Kuhserze as a more childish Unathi, and I hope that he improves player perception of the species as a whole. I have a lot of fun interactions with him as people ICly seems to like him. But I'd like to know OOCly, is there anything you'd like to see changed about him? He started out as a mainly crew-antag, which may have tainted perception of him, but since I made him a Head of Staff, and refuse to do Head of Staff antaggery, he's been better.

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All I know is his Wife has better hair then anyone I've ever seen. So I guess he's pretty cool, he seems reliable and strong willed in most crisis moments, I think that strong angry antag will is really cool.

  • 3 months later...
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Ioraks is a fun character, and I enjoy his IC-shitposting. You've certainly fleshed him out to feel like a three dimensional character that happens to be childish, and not to the point of being gimmicky.

My main criticism is that it's sometimes possible to forget he's a Unathi, and not a human with scales and claws. I'd offer more concrete advice on where to improve in regards to this, but I'm not sure what specifically to pin down. Perhaps some of his views feel 'too' human, and I recognize he's one of the more human-custom-friendly Unathi, so this might not even be unintended. 

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22 minutes ago, elianabeth said:

Ioraks is a fun character, and I enjoy his IC-shitposting. You've certainly fleshed him out to feel like a three dimensional character that happens to be childish, and not to the point of being gimmicky.

My main criticism is that it's sometimes possible to forget he's a Unathi, and not a human with scales and claws. I'd offer more concrete advice on where to improve in regards to this, but I'm not sure what specifically to pin down. Perhaps some of his views feel 'too' human, and I recognize he's one of the more human-custom-friendly Unathi, so this might not even be unintended. 

Don't worry, Kuhwinla will straighten him out.

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